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However, they spoke in codes. Nobody was talking about cocaine or anything remotely related. Now that was the hard part, to crack all the codes. Jorge most often assign one person to certain routes thus not two people in the room knew exactly where the other one would be making the deal. Henry certainly was only another expendable mule that only knew one or two of the routes. It was actually pretty brilliant, this Pulpo, smart, resourceful, meticulous and very seasoned.
The blonde observed “Vincent” from a distance, while the brunette observed everyone else in the room. Her posture was neither eminent nor humble. She just sat there, completely confident and calm and easy at where she was. With her cold and careful eyes, she was probably assessing the situation at all time. Tina got why Pulpo regarded her so highly. Bette was just like Pulpo himself, very meticulous and smart. And this obvious meticulousness convinced her that Bette must have recognized her but there were other things holding her back from exposing her and confronting her. This, she didn’t know if she should be thankful for. But right now, she had to straighten her story so that when the time arrived, she could also be prepared.
When Jodi eventually came to, it was already afternoon. Tina was by her side to serve her some food. However, once the woman regained her strength, she started yelling again. “Vincent?! I want my Vincent! Where is my Vincent?!”
Tina wanted to give her another unit of sedative medication but the dose already exceeded the prescription. She tried to calm the woman down by gently talking to her. “Vincent is busy, Jodi… Your husband assigned her jobs to do.”
“No! You get Vincent for me! I don’t want you I want her!” Jodi started howling like a wounded dog for her beloved Vincent. The entire property would have heard her. She was getting Tina really nervous. She couldn’t screw up this job on her first day.
Quickly, the tall brunette came up to the room, followed by Jorge himself. As soon as Bette saw the blonde’s helpless expression, she felt her heart ache and the protective instinct kick in.
“I… I tried to calm her down but she…”
Jorge rubbed his forehead and nodded. He understood how difficult his wife could be. Even though he was angry and jealous at Vincent, he needed her to deal with his wife because she seemed to be the only one with that power. And he had no reason to blame Vincent for any of this because he knew nothing happened between them. Vincent was an honest and proud woman, adultery was considered degrading for whom. That was the reason he trusted her so much.
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SO to the ladies who just broke my freaking twitter in the morning! You all crazy! But I still love you guys.
SassyGran, promise I’ll post very quickly. See? I’m staying up all night writing now.
Doc, haha Bette is not a tranny. That’ll be weird won’t it? Well, she has a guy’s name for some reason which I’ll explain later into the story.
LishaLove, hey thanks for the ideas! I’ll definitely think about them. And I’m so glad that you liked Round n Round We Go. I’ll try my best to not disappoint.
TN1, wkm, simonem, cellphone, bibi, mscully, I’m continuing! Thank you guys for the support! Don’t forget to leave me some comments and love. I’d love me some comments *batting eye lashes*
Peace :)
Ok, you now have me totally hooked on this story and this Tibette! Not to the extent that I will not keep reminding you of Lover in the Dark but ….
Please burn the midnight and post soon.
My twitter broke too!
SG,
I think the riot on twitter has affected you here in LesFan. LOL! Lover in the Dark is Phacey’s work. (Now I just suddenly remembered the scenes in TN1’s “The Dysfunctional..” Hi hi hi
Hahajahhahahha took the words out my mouth Scribe…ummm SG I think you had just about too many Cuppas lol
Oh sweety, here is a little love and hug for you;)
If it makes you update more and faster, i will give it to you freely and a lot more.
I think Eric/Henry is in big trouble and will be out before he knows what hit him.
Jodi, i didn’t like her in the show and she will give Tina a lot off trouble.
Bette, i can’t wait to hear more about her past and how she became ” Vincent”.
I am totally hooked.
Thanky you for the update.
I hope Bette is also under cover, love your story Thx
GM! Great post! I think Bette is either under cover or she is the Big Boss! Why would Bette say you are at the wrong person? Eric/Henry has being lying to the police force. He’s either starting his own side business(which he will be dead also) or he’s double crossing Pulpo. Something just ain’t right! I pray Tina and Bette stay safe. That damn Jobi has being faking all these years. I dislike that bitch so much. She’s going to be MAJOR trouble for Tina. Please keep her safe when she’s around her. PPS
I think it is also bette undercover cop and has better range than kennard
RT,
Yes we miss your “the lucky one” but when you are posting a story we know that we are not just settling for less coz u always make it a worthy one.
Congrats on this new story of your! Cheers!
Love,
Scribe
I too think Bette is undercover and that’s why she knows so much..but the part with Jodi digging her nails into Tina’s arm aarrgghh I was so ready to jump through this screen..and can we all say ewww Chlamydia just nasty Jodi tsk tsk
I am in agreement with the others…doesn’t matter the story, as long as it is from you, it’s a great one! I, too, am really hooked!!! I’m glad that Bette is still all woman (*sighing*)…yes, please explain the name. SG definitely added something special to her cuppa!
it really was a quick update, and I just now catching up to this story. but I loved it!
I’m glad that Bette no tranny, it would has been really bad. I’m sorry that Jodie is ill, but still doesn’t like her. I think she will be a great danger Tina.
I have so many questions, but I don’t want to bomb them to you :D
but please you give me more background Bette past.
I’m looking forward to the sequel!
The plot thickens. I decided Henry/Eric is up to no good and somehow Bette is a good guy. Loved it, thanks
you know I thought the original was pretty good itself, but your adaptation is amazing , more description of their emotions , that’s good,hope you can give us some NC -17,haha,coz it’s a pity the original skipped that.
So good, loving it
I sincerely hope that Bette is not really a criminal.
do not delay with new chapter.
5 stars .