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“Wings” Chapter 1
L.A 2009.Bette and Tina’s house
“Bette hurry up, you are going to be late for Angie’s event.” Tina hollers to her wife from the kitchen.
“I’m trying, I’m trying”, she yelled back at her from their bedroom. “I can’t do my tie, can you help me please” she said, appearing, trying desperately to tide the last piece of her uniform.
“mmmm…you look so sexy in uniform; you know” Tina said helping her with the tie, then kissing her lips.” I love women in uniform” she declared, smacking Bette’s ass
“I can’t believe that still fit’s me” Bette said looking in the mirror,” it was long time since I wear it.”
“Ok, chop, chop, move or Angie will be mad at you” Tina said and push Bette toward the front door.
“She can’t be mad at me, I’m her hero, right’ Bette said little nerves of the following events at Angie’s school today.
It was one of these days for Bette, when she was proud to be a mother and parent at all. Today was “the career day” at their daughter’s school, and Tina decide this year was Bette’s turn to attend the event. Bette and Tina owned their own Airline Company, since they retired from the military as pilots. Now after more then 15 years later Bette was wearing her uniform again, to attend and recount their history in front of her daughter’s class mates. While she was driving, she replayed her speech over and over again.
“Why I’m scared from some 10 years old toddlers, because they are 10 years old that’s why, god, all this questions, what I’m going to say. And there will be more parents, what will be their reactions toward me, well who cares anyway….”
There she is, in front of the school, there were allot of people already. Kids running here and there. She looked around, trying to spot Angelica, and here she is, her little, precious girl waiting for her.
“Hey little princes” She said, approaching her daughter and kissing her head.” Are you ready honey” she said grabbing Angie’s hand
“Yes mom lets go,I thing it’s time” Angie smiled at her and lead to the class room. There was full of parents and kids waiting for the event to start. Bette greeted few people, and went to the back where the parents were waiting. Mrs. Green, Angie’s teacher stands in front of the class and announced:
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(32 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Yo!! BloodRage I think I’m hooked!
Good idea for a story, but your spelling and grammar need work.
Interesting start. Different. Thank you for this story. Please continue.
Oh yes this is great. Please continue, I realy enjoyed reading your style. PPVS
youn2731, the grammar/spelling issues were maybe just lost in translation… I kind of thought the writer didn’t speak English as a first language. BloodRage, good effort. Maybe you could advertise for a beta reader? That’s something the site doesn’t have and could use, a pool of folks that are willing to be discreet (can’t have them giving the story away) proofreaders.
I think you did a great job, very cute Bette. A few mistakes here and there will definitely not ruin the story.
I like the start of this story. I’m anxious to hear how Tina saved Bette’s life. I thought you did very well with the grammar considering English is not your native tongue. Keep posting!
Excellent start to a great story. Grammar and spelling mistakes are nothing…even native English speakers make them all the time and we read and enjoy their stories! Write on!!
Army B&T helicopter pilots, awesome. Keep em coming. Thanks for the post.
I am waiting for your next chapter! =)furthermore I have to tell you something: don’t be upset because of the gramer remarks!I think you are doing it quite well!I am glad that you were courageus enough to write and share your ideas with us! so go on!(and please post more scenes from ’90;) )
ahm and as you can probably recognise, I am not a native speaker either, English is just my 3rd language ;)
This is good and funny!