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“Wings” Chapter 1
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“Dear Parents and kids, today is a very special day for our school. I’m happy to see so many of you here, to celebrate this little feast. Now I want to invite here, Mrs. Porter, she is Angelica Kennard- Porter’s other mother. She and Mrs. Kennard own “Wings” Airlines; maybe some of you had benn used their airplanes. Mrs. Porter the stage is all yours” Mrs. Green smiled and stepped back to make some place for Bette.
“Amm…Hey everyone, my name is Elizabeth Porter, but many of you knows me like Bette Porter. Yes we own this company and I’m here today to talk to you about my profession.Bette startes here introduction but was cut from a very cute, little girl, sitting in front of her. “Have you ever been on an airplane Mrs. Porter?” she asked shyly. The other kids start to laugh, and the girl became shyer then before.
“What’s your name?” Bette asked sympathetic.
“Christina” she said,looking down at here own hands.
“Christina, it’s a beautiful name” she said, “my wife’s name is Christina, and she is very brave woman, you know” Bette said looking at the little girl, trying to give here some courage.
“How come” Chris asked.
“Well, when we were young, she saved my life few times” Bette said proudly winking at Angie. And Angie smiles her back.
“Really?” Chris asked, her eyes light up, “can you tell us “
Bette looked around and some of the parents nodded in approval.
“Ok, let me start from the beginning. I was 10 years old when I said to my dad “ dad I want to be a pilot, I want to fly with the birds, he looked at me,and just laugh, "Ok "he said be a pilot, "but if you crash down, don’t come home crying." When I turn 18 I went to the pilot school just like you kids, and learned to be a pilot, the best in my class. At the age of 21 I went in the military and became a military pilot and there I met my wife…”
1990. military base in Fort Hood Texas
“Porter” a big man in a uniform yelled in the hallway.
“Yes sir” Bette stands straight,waiting for further instructions.
“The General is asking for you”
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Yo!! BloodRage I think I’m hooked!
Good idea for a story, but your spelling and grammar need work.
Interesting start. Different. Thank you for this story. Please continue.
Oh yes this is great. Please continue, I realy enjoyed reading your style. PPVS
youn2731, the grammar/spelling issues were maybe just lost in translation… I kind of thought the writer didn’t speak English as a first language. BloodRage, good effort. Maybe you could advertise for a beta reader? That’s something the site doesn’t have and could use, a pool of folks that are willing to be discreet (can’t have them giving the story away) proofreaders.
I think you did a great job, very cute Bette. A few mistakes here and there will definitely not ruin the story.
I like the start of this story. I’m anxious to hear how Tina saved Bette’s life. I thought you did very well with the grammar considering English is not your native tongue. Keep posting!
Excellent start to a great story. Grammar and spelling mistakes are nothing…even native English speakers make them all the time and we read and enjoy their stories! Write on!!
Army B&T helicopter pilots, awesome. Keep em coming. Thanks for the post.
I am waiting for your next chapter! =)furthermore I have to tell you something: don’t be upset because of the gramer remarks!I think you are doing it quite well!I am glad that you were courageus enough to write and share your ideas with us! so go on!(and please post more scenes from ’90;) )
ahm and as you can probably recognise, I am not a native speaker either, English is just my 3rd language ;)
This is good and funny!