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    “Wings” Chapter 1

    Story written on December 21, 2009 by BloodRage.
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    “I’m Capitan Elizabeth Porter, I just arrived” “I’m Lieutenant Cristina Kennard, and I just crash down”

    “When are you leaving?”

    “First thing in the morning…I’m sorry Al, for my behavior” She said hugging Alice, and sobbing on her shoulder.

    “It’s ok Porter, its ok” Alice hugs her back, allowing her own tears to fall…

     

    2009. LA

     

    “So you went there” Chris asked Bette

    “Yes, I went there”

    “Were you scared?”

    “Like a shi…She corrects her self, like a chicken” the kids laugh. She smiled too, and looked across the room, in Angie’s direction.

    “Will you tell us about the Gulf Mrs. Porter? A little boy asked

    Bette looked up, and some of the parents nodded again in approval. She continued…

     

    Gulf of Panama. Military Base 1990

     

    Bette arrived in the base early in the morning. She steps out off the big military helicopter. In the same time one F-35 lightning II crash down on the ground. This startled her, but she tried to remains cool, some men were running in direction of the burning plane. A blond woman was standing a said of the crash looking the machine. Bette decides to approach, and ask if everything was ok.

    “Hey,what happened?” Bette asked

    “Hum…?” the woman turn around meeting the most beautiful eyes she had ever seen.

    “I didn’t see the bird…she said ashamed, scratching the back of her neck, looking at the poor crow smashed on her front window.

    “And,you crash down because of it?” Bette asked, she couldn’t suppress her laugh.

    “No, I crash down,because some Son of a bitch. Shot my engine.” She pointed at the burning engines.

    “Jesus, I’m sorry.” Bette said ashamed of her remark.” I’m Capitan Elizabeth Porter, I just arrived” she said,extending her hand.

    “I’m Lieutenant Cristina Kennard, and I just crash down” she said smiling, taking Bette’s hand and shaking it.

     “I see you two already met” They heard voice from behind.” Capitan Porter, I’m your superior,Major Phyllis Kroll. Thy salutes and shakes hands. So Capitan Porter you and Lieutenant Kennard will be flying together. She said smiling, knowing how crazy Tina was, and that no one want to fly with her.” So, have a nice day ladies, see you tomorrow,for some trainings. And Kennard, you will be punished again for this”

    “Yes Ma’am” they saluted again and Phyllis left.

    “Damn” Tina said

    “How many crashes do you have” Bette asked concerned for her life.

    “Few…” Tina said and mumbled “this week” under her nose.

    “Great, if the faking war doesn’t kill me, she’ll for sure!”

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    5. youn2731, the grammar/spelling issues were maybe just lost in translation… I kind of thought the writer didn’t speak English as a first language. BloodRage, good effort. Maybe you could advertise for a beta reader? That’s something the site doesn’t have and could use, a pool of folks that are willing to be discreet (can’t have them giving the story away) proofreaders.

    7. I like the start of this story. I’m anxious to hear how Tina saved Bette’s life. I thought you did very well with the grammar considering English is not your native tongue. Keep posting!

    8. Excellent start to a great story. Grammar and spelling mistakes are nothing…even native English speakers make them all the time and we read and enjoy their stories! Write on!!

    10. I am waiting for your next chapter! =)furthermore I have to tell you something: don’t be upset because of the gramer remarks!I think you are doing it quite well!I am glad that you were courageus enough to write and share your ideas with us! so go on!(and please post more scenes from ’90;) )

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