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“Wings” Chapter 1
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“Yes Sir” she said again saluting.
General Carroll was taught, old man, with very long military history. He was sitting behind his big desk, covered with different memories of his active military days. Bette knocked on the door, waiting to be called inside. The General raised his head from the papers and looked at the door.
“Com on in” He said
Bette stepped inside, saluting. She patiently waites for him to finish his job.
“Porter, I asked for you, because there is a possibility for you to be transferred in another base.They need more pilots."
"Yes sir"she answered.
“Ok, then tomorrow I’ll sand the papers back, and I’ll tell them that you are ready.
“Um…” she hesitated at first but decide” What the hell I’m off of here any way”,” Um…sir can I ask where I’ll be send."
The General looked at here under his glasses,” You young lady, are going to Gulf of Panama.
Bette went pale,” But there is a war!” she said
“And they need brave, young pilots, just like you. You are the best in the base, don’t disappoint me Porter.” He said and looked back down in the papers.” You can go now, pack your stuff; you are living first thing in the morning.” Bette salutes again, and left. She went to her military dorm, and starts to pack. Her thoughts were flying in different directions. A hundred questions were making her sweat and dizzy. Then was a knock on the door. “Com on in” she said. Alice pokes her head inside.
“Where are you going Porter?” She asked her friend
“General Carroll is transferring my in another base” She said looking down in her belongings, careful not to forget something.
“But you will be near, right?” Alice asked not liking the Bette’s mood.
“If you think the Gulf of Panama is near, then yes” She said now little irritated
“But there is a…” Alice was cut by Bette “…War, do you think I didn’t know that”
“Calm down Bette” Alice said little startled form her friend’s outburst.
“I can’t believe he just sends me there, I just can’t. All this time I was tying to be the best, and now he is sending me on assuredly dead.” Bette said fuming.
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Yo!! BloodRage I think I’m hooked!
Good idea for a story, but your spelling and grammar need work.
Interesting start. Different. Thank you for this story. Please continue.
Oh yes this is great. Please continue, I realy enjoyed reading your style. PPVS
youn2731, the grammar/spelling issues were maybe just lost in translation… I kind of thought the writer didn’t speak English as a first language. BloodRage, good effort. Maybe you could advertise for a beta reader? That’s something the site doesn’t have and could use, a pool of folks that are willing to be discreet (can’t have them giving the story away) proofreaders.
I think you did a great job, very cute Bette. A few mistakes here and there will definitely not ruin the story.
I like the start of this story. I’m anxious to hear how Tina saved Bette’s life. I thought you did very well with the grammar considering English is not your native tongue. Keep posting!
Excellent start to a great story. Grammar and spelling mistakes are nothing…even native English speakers make them all the time and we read and enjoy their stories! Write on!!
Army B&T helicopter pilots, awesome. Keep em coming. Thanks for the post.
I am waiting for your next chapter! =)furthermore I have to tell you something: don’t be upset because of the gramer remarks!I think you are doing it quite well!I am glad that you were courageus enough to write and share your ideas with us! so go on!(and please post more scenes from ’90;) )
ahm and as you can probably recognise, I am not a native speaker either, English is just my 3rd language ;)
This is good and funny!