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Work to Do- The Conclusion (FINALLY!)
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“Me too Al. But just the fact that you can tell me that shows how far we are from where we were before,” Dana pointed out.
“I think before we were so paralyzed by everything we had to lose if
this didn’t work, we were unable to admit that there were even issues
to be worked on,” Dana marveled.
Alice felt immensely relieved to hear Dana voicing similar concerns.
She buried her face in Dana’s shirt, chewing on a button. It came
undone. Pleased with the result, she chewed on a second button until
she achieved a similar result. Delighted, she set in on a third button.
“Alice, you wouldn’t be trying to seduce me in the middle of a serious conversation, would you?” Dana asked.
“No,” Alice denied meekly. “I thought we were done.”
“You did? Were we?”
“We agreed to take things slowly, to give each other space and to talk
about things if we feel uncomfortable,” Alice recapped, breathing into
Dana’s belly. It both turned Dana on and tickled her.
“Okay. I’m good with that,” Dana gasped, shifting lower and giving Alice better access.
Alice laughed, triumphantly moving up another button. Continuing her
assault on Dana’s shirt, she whispered into her cleavage, “Dana, I know
the conversation wasn’t really finished, but it could go on for a
while, right? I just thought we could take a little break.”
“A break would be good,” Dana nodded enthusiastically, sliding further down the couch.
“We’ll need lots of breaks Alhere and there. You know, throughout the years”
“Definitely,” Alice agreed. “Cause this could be a very long conversation.”
“DaneGrowing up, everyone I ever counted on everyone I ever truly
loved or depended on for one reason or another couldn’t be there for
me”
Dana pulled her head back, taking in Alice’s somber expression.
“Um. What happened to ‘Has Dana been a naughty girl?’ she teased.
Alice smiled, snuggling up under Dana’s chin.
“I’m sorry, I’m not sure how that popped out I DO need to say some
things to you Dana. I need to apologize to you and to tell you some
things that you’ve probably already figured out but that I think you
need to hear from me”
“Now?” Dana inquired. “Right this minute?”
Alice laughed. “You want to take a break?”
Dana considered the question. “Well, yes.”
Alice gave in, offering Dana her sexiest smile, “I seewell in that case.”Has Dana been a naughty girl?”
The End.
Enjoy Season Three! Let’s all hope Ilene has a Danish heart in the end thanks for reading.
capesquad@mac.com
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It is with great sadness that I’m writing this comment for the last time. *Sniff* This fic is on my top three favorite fics on this site, so thank you for giving meaning and reason to this ship. Anyway we can convince IC to flim your version of the story instead?
I’m saddened too that this is the end of your fic. This is one of my favorite Danish fics and I’ll miss eagerly awaiting Sunday nights for updates. It’s a great story Cape and thanks for sharing it with us. We’ll hope for the best in S3. I’ll go to sleep tonight with “Has Dana been a naughty girl….” echoing through my head (in Leisha’s voice of course!).
Cape – Absolutely wonderful story, from beginning to end. I can only hope to feel this good in 45 minutes, but alas, i don’t think so. I’ve told you this before, you nailed the characters wonderfully, their mannerisms, insecurities, and just overall characteristics. It was well written, meaningful, funny, sad and bittersweet. Sorry to see it go and hope to see something new from you soon! Thanks for taking the time to write and share it with us!
Awww this was a beautiful story, and I’m wit layla on convincing IC to film your version instead heh, Thanks for the story!!
Capesquad – It’s so wonderful to see you back, but so sad that this is the end of your story. I hope you will continuing writing danish stories. I look forward to reading your next one!
I’ve been waiting for the ending to this great story. I’m only sad that it’s over. I know its one of my all time favorite Danish fics. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks.
Fantastic way to end a great story. Really very realistic portrayal of their issues and yet you kept it funny and sexy! This is also in my top three faves so sorry to see it finish. Thanks for writing it.
awwww what a sweet way to end it. ive loved this story from the start. i’ll miss it. i hope you create something just as fabulous. great job
I can’t believe it’s over. :( I’m sad. Ummm… Can we also visit them now and then? Just drop by, see if they’re doing ok? :) Loved it Cape, thanks for the realistic journey.
You’ve finished it!? Unbelievable! So sad to see it end, just to make me happy I’m going to be in a denial state and still believe you’re going to continue writing this briliant fic. So when are you posting the next chapter :D? Thanks for giving us your insight to s3, desperately hoping it happens.