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Work to Do- The Conclusion (FINALLY!)
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Dana dove on top of her of in an enthusiastic battle for dominance.
They tussled. Her mouth found Alice’s in the midst of their struggle,
sobering them equally.
Suddenly both women stopped rolling and looked at one and other. Eyes
softened if only for a moment, acknowledging what this meant as they
slowly began kissing one another.
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Dawn Saturday
Alice awoke around six. She was immediately aware of Dana’s body
pressed into hers. Curling tighter into the brunette, she folded up
behind her and nuzzled her neck thru brown curls.
Dana’s scent, so familiar and sexy, ignited another strong wave of
desire. She hugged her closer still and fought the urge to wake her.
Dana was already going to be both hung over and sleep deprived. They’d
only gotten to sleep a couple of hours ago and the tennis player had an
8:30am courtesy game with a sponsor.
Knowing further sleep wasn’t likely Alice simply enjoyed lying there
next to her. Absently, her hand trailed over the athlete’s hip as she
watched her sleep.
Dana rolled slightly away from her, toward the mattress. She hiked her leg up in a curl, pushing her ass into Alice.
Alice smiled, brushing her hand down the hip it had rested on to the
newly exposed thigh. The leg welcomed her with another subtle shift.
A rumble was heard from Dana, non descript but encouraging to Alice.
Reasoning that it was just a ‘courtesy match’ she began to dance her
fingers lightly over Dana’s thigh. Slowly she made her way to the
interior.
Dana moaned her approval and rolled completely onto her stomach,
spreading herself in invitation. Alice swallowed, taking in the
beautiful picture presented her.
She couldn’t believe how turned on she’d gotten so quickly, she could feel Dana’s answering excitement.
Dana pulled herself onto all fours and pushed back onto Alice’s hand
before twisting around to embrace her, she gave Alice a slow smile,
“Good Morning.”
OUTSIDE DANA’S Condo, 8 am
They kissed good-bye by Alice’s car; each resisting the urge to make plans for that evening.
“Well, thanks again for returning my car,” Dana blushed, backing away.
Alice’s returning smile was impossibly wide.
“Entirely my pleasure,” she giggled, climbing into her car. She started
the Mini and slipped on her sunglasses, looking smoother than she felt.
Dana swooned visibly, waving her off.
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It is with great sadness that I’m writing this comment for the last time. *Sniff* This fic is on my top three favorite fics on this site, so thank you for giving meaning and reason to this ship. Anyway we can convince IC to flim your version of the story instead?
I’m saddened too that this is the end of your fic. This is one of my favorite Danish fics and I’ll miss eagerly awaiting Sunday nights for updates. It’s a great story Cape and thanks for sharing it with us. We’ll hope for the best in S3. I’ll go to sleep tonight with “Has Dana been a naughty girl….” echoing through my head (in Leisha’s voice of course!).
Cape – Absolutely wonderful story, from beginning to end. I can only hope to feel this good in 45 minutes, but alas, i don’t think so. I’ve told you this before, you nailed the characters wonderfully, their mannerisms, insecurities, and just overall characteristics. It was well written, meaningful, funny, sad and bittersweet. Sorry to see it go and hope to see something new from you soon! Thanks for taking the time to write and share it with us!
Awww this was a beautiful story, and I’m wit layla on convincing IC to film your version instead heh, Thanks for the story!!
Capesquad – It’s so wonderful to see you back, but so sad that this is the end of your story. I hope you will continuing writing danish stories. I look forward to reading your next one!
I’ve been waiting for the ending to this great story. I’m only sad that it’s over. I know its one of my all time favorite Danish fics. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks.
Fantastic way to end a great story. Really very realistic portrayal of their issues and yet you kept it funny and sexy! This is also in my top three faves so sorry to see it finish. Thanks for writing it.
awwww what a sweet way to end it. ive loved this story from the start. i’ll miss it. i hope you create something just as fabulous. great job
I can’t believe it’s over. :( I’m sad. Ummm… Can we also visit them now and then? Just drop by, see if they’re doing ok? :) Loved it Cape, thanks for the realistic journey.
You’ve finished it!? Unbelievable! So sad to see it end, just to make me happy I’m going to be in a denial state and still believe you’re going to continue writing this briliant fic. So when are you posting the next chapter :D? Thanks for giving us your insight to s3, desperately hoping it happens.