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You (Part the Third)
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“But can’t I just…throw the box away, or something? I mean, we were on pretty good terms earlier, and I don’t want to mess that up. She was treating me shitty because I spread rumors about her on the radio, Helena. It’s not like she was being bitchy just for the hell of it.”
“I know that, Alice. But I truly believe that Dana will eventually understand that this is something you need to do. I’m really not trying to be evil here, but I’m fairly certain that if you don’t do this now, you never will. You said that you and Dana made a lot of progress earlier, and dismantling the shrine only adds to that progress. But there are some things that you’re going to have to do on your own. Come on, I’ll go with you. I’ll stand by the door, so you won’t be going in alone. Come on,” she repeated softly, and reached across Alice to open the passenger door.
Dana was completely shocked when Alice proceeded to dump what had to be at least 20 different toys on the table in front of her. “I didn’t have time to wash everything, so…” Alice said before walking back outside with Helena. Dana looked at Lara in horror, but her girlfriend’s expression was a mix of embarrassment and I-told-you-so.
“Great,” Dana muttered, sweeping as much as she could off the table and back into the box before too many people saw. As ticked off as she was, she couldn’t help being grateful that at least Alice had sprung this on her when the Planet was virtually empty. Hell, it was so slow that Lara’d been able to take a break and look over some travel sites on the laptop with her. Still, Dana was pretty embarrassed, and Lara’s smug expression wasn’t helping things. Sighing in frustration, she pulled out her cell phone as Lara went back to the kitchen, giving Dana a hug and shoving the box under the table with her foot before she walked off.
Alice was quiet on the ride home. Nothing much had happened; Dana hadn’t yelled, but then again, she didn’t really have time to. Alice felt pretty shitty about it, and Helena was starting to regret that she’d even suggested it. Still, Alice did feel like some weight had been lifted off her shoulders…maybe getting rid of all the Dana stuff was a good thing. She just had to work on the tactics she used to do it.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)