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You (Part the Third)
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“I’m sorry,” was all Alice could say in response. She felt horrible, and Dana could hear it. She sighed, trying to think of a way to make it better, then couldn’t help but wonder why. Alice was the one who’d dumped every sex toy they’d ever used on a table in a public café, after all. Still, she hated knowing Alice was sad, no matter what the cause of it was.
“Hey, I said I accepted your apology, remember? Come on, Al, don’t cry." She tried to change the subject. "You going to the Vegas thing tonight? Kit says it’s supposed to be packed, she hired some Blakie guy to host it. I don’t know who he is, but the way Kit’s acting he’s pretty important.” She was amazed at how good it felt to be talking with Al about everyday things.
“Billy Blakie? Yeah, he’s this big party promoter, pretty famous in the nightlife circuit. I did some research on him for one of my Top Ten articles last year, before the Chart started getting big. He’s probably the gayest man on the planet.”
“In the Planet? That wouldn’t be too tough, Al, since it’s pretty much a lesbian hangout.” Satisfied with this assessment, Dana grinned into the phone.
“You’re dumb sometimes, Dane. No, not in the Planet, on the planet. He’s probably the most flamboyant gay man on earth, which means that yes, I will definitely be going.”
“Oh. Well, that’s good, it’ll be good for us all to hang out again. I’ve really missed that.”
“Me too,” Alice whispered. She didn’t want to ask the next question, really, but she supposed she must be a masochist since she did it anyway. “Is Lara going with you?”
Dana winced audibly. “Yeah, Al, she is. I mean, I could ask her not to come, but she’s cooking for the event and all…”
“No, no, don’t do that. I mean, she’s part of the group now. I swear I’m not trying to be a bitch here, Dana. If you like her, I’m going to have to accept that. I’d rather put up with Lara than have everyone hate me.” Shit, that sounded mean. She hadn’t meant it quite that way; it wasn’t that she disliked Lara as a person; she just disliked her with Dana. Which was weird, because before now she’d always thought Lara was one of the few good choices Dana had made.
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Awesome freakin’ job! I loved the update. “That doesn’t mean that I’m just going to forget about all the years before she and I got together.” Thank you! Someone realizes this! If only an unnamed person would have realized this before everything went kapooie. I love that Dana and Alice are becoming more comforatable around each other. I’ve got to admit, I really love the fact that Dana seems quite jealous of Helena. :) I hope Dana continues to let Alice in. I think that you truly have a grasp on the characters. You write them very well. Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Keep it up…this has great potential…if only Chaiken took it in this direction!
I love this fanfic and I really want you to keep Dana alive like IC should have done! This is def how season 3 should have gone down from a danish perspective, that is if they had to break up in the first place, can you tell I’m still bitter about the whole of season 3 lol?! anyway great chap and please post soon! xx
I loved how strong Dana was with Lara when they were talking about Alice. It’s realistic that they’re trying, but still aren’t quite comfortable with each other. I hope you won’t follow the death route that IC took. I’m much more interested in your take on how things could have gone.
Another brill part. Really enjoying your take on series 3. Great stuff, pps :)
Muted,alls i can say is AWSOME update babe!!!!You are def making this better to handle then the acual s3! Im glad you are going to do what i suggested,and yes darlin we will watch the good seasons soon! You are doing on hell of a job writing this ,please continue on your own pace!!PPS
I LOVE this story. You’re doing such a great job with it… so much better than the actual season 3. And I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle it all. Fabulous job.
And now the lump? You’re killing me here…please don’t kill Dana too! And yes, you can do ANYTHING you want in your story, so come on, do it already. I know you want to. You want to, right? Seriously, really great update. And I am, however painfully, enjoying your take on S3. PPS
That was a fantastic chapter. Please, keep goin’ on:-)
i may be able to re watch season 3 after all… you have a great sense of Alice and Dana- your conversations and reactions are dead on. Your take on season 3 remedies so much of what was stolen from their personalities this year by the writers. Can’t wait to see where you take us. THANKS!
this story really breaks my heart. its just so damn hard for both of them and i feel their pain. damn. please continue. i really love it. i wish it was S3! i dont know whats next but i am very anxious to find out. :)