Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Promise
Login to add story to favorites
(21 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
WOAH this is the most comments ever. Since I waited so long to write I will answer them all…so bare with me, here goes…
cabecou – thanks luv…transition? From sick night to funny? Or from romance day to sick day to this? Hahaha I just made that soooo much more complicated then it needed to be aye?
Lwordjunkie – hahaha yeah I had to sneak Van in there as the brother…but there is oh so much more in the future…hang in there luv there is a tangled web I have woven in my head.
Cfone- happiness? In Shanes life? You havent read the last 3467439 chapters have you girl? Nope Shane will stay a puppet on my skillful strings.
Adb – the privilege of reading my story…no thanks to all of you for the privilege of having a great fan base…I race home to see your comments…Im kewl like that aye
Phoenix – thanks! you really think this was the funniest chapter? I thought the busted nose and crush balls was better between shane and alice…yeah esp with her arm in the door. I never see my humor.
Chinesegirl – thanks did you get my hints that I dropped about van… I was hoping they werent too obvious…but have you guessed the rest?
Lyn – 5 *s from you aye? Youre too good to me.
Searchin – you liked the sharing of the plate…I used to have a friend I would do that with so I tossed it in . You will def get more.
Confussed – hey girl how are you ? (for real for real?) Hope my last e-mail wasnt too I dont know condescending towards your culture or insensitive. You know where to come when you need sum written luvin aye.
Gina – funny and heart wrenching? Heart wrenching how? And in a good or bad way?
Lady_oracle – Canadian ? No I type aye a lot. Its this grunt type noise I make at the end of my sentences Im from jersey not canada…as for the characters…Im glad you picked up that there are certain people that talk alike…its there for a reason aye
Kabby – thanks I didnt realize there was a lot of depth there…I just think in chapter two I did more talking as the voice in your head while you read the descriptions of the characters actions…thats where I thought my depth was.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.