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The Promise
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Sky – you are SOOOOO kicking ***** right now! I cant believe you are the only one that remembered Shanes pick up. Luvin ya and no it will be addressed way down the line.
InShane – Alice is coming back…but when are you coming back is the question! Yeah I like ensemble casts…I hate when its just one person
Nix – hey thanks Im glad you like Van. I didnt get to work on him as much in my head as I did Father Joe and Dash…I hate when people just start off a story with a character that everyone on TLW knows form the past…I wanted to ease them all in.
M_rave – if you are reading this I dont know whether to kick your ***** from slacking off, or slap you on the back for finally taking a break..either way hope youre doing okay.
Dividedsoul – welcome to my story and thanks for posting a message, I will def keep them coming.
M – a ti te gusta. And si you better criticize! I need people to point me in the right direction.
Es – thanks luv for posting a reply to my story its good to see people are still reading from the beginning.
Marsupial. Ur name is funny ~ snickers~ yes I will write more chapters dont worry
lucyinthesky – you think Im great at writing dialogue? Thats funny. I actually hate it. I had to write a script once ( only like 15 pages) and I didnt write any dialogue the whole time.
Duzz – thanks for commenting…I wont leave you hanging…..for too long!
Tooshort – welcome buddy…thanks for posting a replay I hope I leave you satisfied.
Amazed – you liked the last line? I try to always end on a piece of dialogue….heheh hope youlike this chapter.
Shy – thanks for kicking my *****….dont you dare do it again…I might shock you and hold out longer on the next chapter. ~wiggles eyebrows and runs to the loft to make a phone call~
and now without further hesitation….
Previously on ***** Of Our Lives…..
Tina: God that man is beautiful…Shane where have you been hiding him all this time?
Dash: In her closet.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.