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The Promise
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When Dash giggled, Shane nudged her and she quickly shut up.
Shane: He lives in the rectory with Father Joe….and he never leaves other then to work at the hospital….
Lara: Hes a doctor?
Dash: And a priest.
Tina: Guys cool it before Father Doolittle gets in here.
Bette: Father Doolittle?
Tina: Doc Holywood?
They all shook there heads no, showing their lack of amusement by Tinas sad excuse for a joke.
Lara: I think we should just call him Doctor Hotty….man hes got the body of The Rock.
Tina: Oh and the voice of Vin Diesel.
Lara: Mmmm I cant wait to hear it….Id so go straight for that man…no offense hunny.
Dana: God hes like a male Shane, hes got the women converting over him already.
Tina: Id do more than switch for him.
Tina blushed and avoided Bettes eye contact as she popped a strawberry into her mouth.
Bette: And what the ***** is that supposed to mean?
Tina: It means Id have two husbands.
Tina wiggled her eyebrows and Bette gave her a look of disgust as Dash laughed with a mouth full of pancakes.
Tina: Come on baby look at him….hes like a Greek God…besides with his good looks combined with mine, wed have little ***** kids running around the house…theyd look like….like
Dash: Like me!
Dash did a little jig in her seat while Lara handed her a glass of orange juice. Shane started getting agitated by all of the comments and did everything to hold her tongue. Her face grew red with the onslaught of semi vulgar comments.
Dash: Trust me if he were willing to show that body a little more often, Id go to confession everyday.
Tina: Well between him being a doctor and a catholic priest, either way I think youll get a little hands on action out of him.
Shane jumped up and slammed her fist on the table.
Shane: Would any other Dykes like to try and ***** my brother!
Chapter 45
Alice clicked through the TV channels, flipping aimlessly over the countless programs. It was Tuesday night, and she had been held up in her apartment for three days, only leaving to go to work. Shed watched every movie she had, including the love conquers all melodramas shed obsessed with over the years. Even her favorite movie Frankie and Johnnie couldnt make her happy. Now she was reduced to watching the flashy McG inspired TV shows that made every little subject seem like a scene from Requiem for a Dream.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.