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The Promise
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Dash became creative as she blew against Alices ***** while using her tongue ring to make her crazy. She thrust her fingers deep within Alice, until she felt Shanes hand gently tap her wrist. She looked up to see Shane pull out of the passionate kiss with Alice.
Shane: lets both make her *****.
Dash nodded with a knowing grin and moved up alongside Alice. Alice watched in suspicion and let out a scream when Shane thrust three fingers inside of her. Dash drew on of her nipples into her mouth and Shane the other. Alice bucked like crazy when Dash reached down and pressed her thumb firmly against her *****. Alices body began to quake as Dash circled her ***** while Shane twisted and curled her fingers inside of her.
Alice: *****…Jesus…Christ….*****…*****!….Im gonna…..*****….
Alice could feel herself slipping over the edge. Who knew the young teen could be such a quick study. It was like ***** was in her blood. Just as Alice was about to *****, she turned towards the crunching noises she heard across the room. She could see three figures sitting across the room watching the action.
Alice: What the *****!?!?!
Suddenly, a spot light came on from nowhere. Alice saw a small sign with an arrow that read Cheap Seats, pointing to the three men. Van sat with a large foam hand on that held up two fingers instead of the usual #1. He also wore a construction hat that was equipt with two beer cans on the side and a long hose that ran from both into his mouth. His tight t-shirt read Got Figs? and was stretched over his massive chest. Next to him was Father Joe, who was eating a giant Bratwurst, covered in every condiment imaginable, as he sipped on a glass of wine in what looked like the Holy Grail. He was decked out in the Popes robe and the giant gold hat sat at his feet filled with popcorn in the top. He reached down for a handful and threw it up in the air catching a few kernels in his mouth.
Alice gasped when she saw the third person was Jesus Christ himself. In his lap sat a large silver tray with fish and loaves of bread. His shirt read What Would Shane Do?, and his hair was dreaded. Jesus winked at Alice, as he lit the large glass water bong in his hand.
Alice turned to Van and then looked up at Dash who was confused.
Dash: What? Jesus is our Home boy!
Alice jumped up in horror. Her body was covered in sweat and she flapped her arms frantically to push the crazy thoughts from her mind. She desperately searched the room with her eyes to see it was all a dream and she was alone in the dark. A wacked out, acid laced dream that would get her sent straight to prison before she went to *****.
Alice smoothed her soaked hair back and sat up on the edge of her bed. She never made it to the shower. Shed fallen asleep on the bed with her feet on the floor. She looked behind her and saw the morning light creeping through her window. She peeled off her wet shirt and tossed it to the floor of her closet. She contemplated taking a shower, and thought the results might resemble those of her dream.
Alice: ***** the shower….I need a drink!
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.