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Vignettes: Chapter 44
Tina roused from sleep. She squinted as she opened her eyes, adjusting to the sunlight peeking in through the curtains. For a moment, she couldnt figure out where she was. After a quick study of the room, it became obvious where she slept last night. She looked down and saw a brown arm draped around her midsection. She felt a warm breath against her ear with a slight snore. As she moved, she sucked in a deep breath, trying to not to cry out in pain. Her neck was stiff as a board from remaining in such an awkward position all night. She deftly maneuvered out of the bed and snuck to the floor, searching through her bags. The clock read 6:00 and judging by the bright sun, Tina figured dawn just recently approached. Finding her digital camera, Tina looked for the best angle to take some quick pictures of the sleeping Bette. She rested the camera on the desk and took several photos without the flash for fear of waking her. The results were breathtaking. Tina smiled as she saw the soft and mellow lighting causing Bette to glow in the early morning. She took a few minutes to watch her before pulling herself off the ground.
In the corner of the room, Tina saw the box Bette and Shane dug up from their old house. Curious, she opened it and sorted through the items again, as she had done about ten times before throughout the week. She found a thick round white candle and laughed to herself. It was melted down to the very bottom of the wick. It was the candle from their wedding, the unity candle. After the wedding, Bette thought it would be romantic to light it every time they made love for a month afterwards as a reminder of their wedding. It lasted one night before there was nothing left of the candle. At the time, Bette had simply shrugged and put it on the shelf, explaining that it would also symbolize their hot passionate *****. Tina laughed as Bette began undressing her.
Tina spotted an old empty wine bottle in the box. She looked at the label and the date and remembered what it was from. After they had this first bottle, this vineyard and choice of wine became their favorite whenever they were planning on sharing a special night together.
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(58 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
wonderful as always fareast, waiting eagerly for the next.
K
Great chapter. Just love this story.
Amazing. I’ve been waiting impatiently as I always do for your next chapters. Please continueee!
please take your time with this story, they are so not ready for sex at all. I love this story and wish you would post sooner, but I can wait. keep going don’t listen to what people say it your story. I don’t understand why Tina is upset about the house?? maybe you could fill me in if I missing something, if not maybe it will be in future chapters
so happy to read you again! pls keep ’em coming. well done!
i am so bummed when i get to the end of one of your chapters, knowing that that is it for a while- but happy to know that there is more to come. thanks!!
Your pace is impeccable. Since the first chapter you’ve sustained wonderful writing. Not to mention the creative stories you manage to put together cohesively. You’re right about not rushing them into a physical encounter. Thanks so much!
Good, as always. Drag it out as long as you wish. I’m quite enjoying it too much to think of it ending.
Thanks for keeping it realistic and letting them take their time. Is the first paragraph a homage to the movie High Art? It reminds me so much of a scene from that movie.
Yeah, that opening was quite High Art like. Fareast, I LOVE your stories! You write really well, and your flashbacks in this story are just wonderful little glimpses of Bette and Tina’s past. Fab stuff!
Please take your time with this. I love every single line, every word. Nice way to end a superb weekend. Hmmmm, what has Tina so interested in this house?
WAHOOOOO We’re getting closer. We’re getting closer… I cannot wait…
This story is a treasure.
I was thrilled to see that you had posted another chapter. I’ve been craving this story. Good chapter.
You’re incredible. Please, follow your own pace. It’s very real. And just lovely. Thanks for posting another wonderful chapter.
you have woven an amazing story – thank you, I’m completely hooked.
That was so sweet and cute, loved it.
Thank you.
Lovely…please give us more.
This storyvis such a page-turner! I always find that I reach the end of each chapter quicker than I want to, always leaving me wanting more! Don’t change anything with the timing of your story because it flows so nicely the way you’ve been going. Thanks:D
Now Fareast…how cute is that. Just amazing and keep them chapters comming. Post soon
Wow, this was so cute, so romantic, so real..
i love this story, and believe me no one is in a hurry, take as much time as u need, as long as you’ll keep writing great chapters like this one..
This is great and your pace is just fine. Please continue!
i too like the pace that this story is taking, i’m happy you posted, i was getting antsy, i’ll admit :) keep up the wonderful work, please don’t keep us waiting long though!