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Vignettes: Chapter 44
Well, you guys are going to have fun tonight. Alice smiled. Heres the agenda. She pointed to an envelope on the counter.
Toss it to me. Tina said, rolling her eyes.
Alice shook her head. Nope. Not til you guys are walking out the door.
Thats ridiculous. Just let me see it.
No.
Its nothing bad, I promise. Shane commented, looking up from her magazine. You guysll have fun.
She gets to see it and I dont? Tina accused. Why is everyone keeping secrets from me?
What other secrets are you talking about? Alice put her hand on her hip.
Tina ignored the question and instead asked, Did Bette say anything to you guys about finding a place to live out here yet?
No, but I know shes been looking. She actually met with a realtor this week I think. Alice said. Why?
Just wondering. Tina muttered.
Bette made her way into the kitchen, yawning. T, why are you out here? She had a hurt look on her face.
I woke up early and couldnt sleep. I came out here and apparently fell asleep on the chair.
Dana grabbed a bag by the door and waved goodbye.
Wheres she off to? Bette asked.
Tennis match. Alice said.
You going?
Alice nodded. Im bringing someone. She blushed.
Really? Bette arched an eyebrow. Maybe Ill tag along. You want to come, T?
Nah. Thanks. I have some running around to do with Shane.
Shane quickly looked at Tina, puzzled but furiously nodded as she saw the look on Tinas face, telling her to play along.
Be back by 6:00 on the dot. Alice smirked. You have dinner at 7:00.
Wouldnt miss it for the world. Tina replied sarcastically. She stood up and walked outside onto the patio. Shane nonchalantly followed her.
Whats going on? Shane whispered.
Nothing. Why?
Why did you volunteer me to run errands with you today?
Just wanted some company. Tina tried to look innocent.
Youre up to something. I can tell.
What makes you think that?
You have that look – I remember that look. Shane smiled. And I wont go anywhere with you unless you tell me what were doing.
Fine, but keep quiet. Tina lowered her voice. Were going to look at a house.
A house? Shane was baffled. What house?
At this address. Tina took a piece of paper out of her pocket and handed it to Shane. She looked at Tina to see if she was serious.
Hmm… why? Shane asked.
I have my reasons. Tina grinned and walked back inside the house, ready to take a shower while Shane stood outside shaking her head and sighing.
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(58 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
wonderful as always fareast, waiting eagerly for the next.
K
Great chapter. Just love this story.
Amazing. I’ve been waiting impatiently as I always do for your next chapters. Please continueee!
please take your time with this story, they are so not ready for sex at all. I love this story and wish you would post sooner, but I can wait. keep going don’t listen to what people say it your story. I don’t understand why Tina is upset about the house?? maybe you could fill me in if I missing something, if not maybe it will be in future chapters
so happy to read you again! pls keep ’em coming. well done!
i am so bummed when i get to the end of one of your chapters, knowing that that is it for a while- but happy to know that there is more to come. thanks!!
Your pace is impeccable. Since the first chapter you’ve sustained wonderful writing. Not to mention the creative stories you manage to put together cohesively. You’re right about not rushing them into a physical encounter. Thanks so much!
Good, as always. Drag it out as long as you wish. I’m quite enjoying it too much to think of it ending.
Thanks for keeping it realistic and letting them take their time. Is the first paragraph a homage to the movie High Art? It reminds me so much of a scene from that movie.
Yeah, that opening was quite High Art like. Fareast, I LOVE your stories! You write really well, and your flashbacks in this story are just wonderful little glimpses of Bette and Tina’s past. Fab stuff!
Please take your time with this. I love every single line, every word. Nice way to end a superb weekend. Hmmmm, what has Tina so interested in this house?
WAHOOOOO We’re getting closer. We’re getting closer… I cannot wait…
This story is a treasure.
I was thrilled to see that you had posted another chapter. I’ve been craving this story. Good chapter.
You’re incredible. Please, follow your own pace. It’s very real. And just lovely. Thanks for posting another wonderful chapter.
you have woven an amazing story – thank you, I’m completely hooked.
That was so sweet and cute, loved it.
Thank you.
Lovely…please give us more.
This storyvis such a page-turner! I always find that I reach the end of each chapter quicker than I want to, always leaving me wanting more! Don’t change anything with the timing of your story because it flows so nicely the way you’ve been going. Thanks:D
Now Fareast…how cute is that. Just amazing and keep them chapters comming. Post soon
Wow, this was so cute, so romantic, so real..
i love this story, and believe me no one is in a hurry, take as much time as u need, as long as you’ll keep writing great chapters like this one..
This is great and your pace is just fine. Please continue!
i too like the pace that this story is taking, i’m happy you posted, i was getting antsy, i’ll admit :) keep up the wonderful work, please don’t keep us waiting long though!