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Vignettes: Chapter 44
Bette… what is all this? Tina looked at the table and all the candles around the ledge of the roof.
Dinner. Will you join me?
There was glitter all over the table and Bette had it all over her, as well. Tina reached across the table and pulled some out of Bettes hair.
Oops. I got this stuff all over everything. Bette laughed.
They ate the meal Bette prepared and Tina was still amazed at how Bette was able to pull it off without her knowing. Throughout the dinner and dessert, Bette kept refilling their wine glasses whenever they became low. Tina didnt object, though she was finding herself drinking too much too quickly and decided only one bottle would be enough for a while. When there was only a little left in the bottle, Bette asked if Tina would refill the glasses. Tina looked at her curiously, wondering why she didnt just fill them herself, as she had been doing all night. Tina took the bottle and poured the last of the wine into the glasses but when she did, she heard a rattling in the bottle. She glanced at Bette who shrugged her shoulders, but clearly had a twinkle in her eyes. Tina peered in through the glass and saw a small ring. She raised an eyebrow at Bette who didnt say anything. Tina dumped the bottle upside down in her palm and a white gold ring tumbled out along with some wine. The ring was in the shape of a womans body wrapped around a circle, but only if looked at closely. From first glance, it appeared to have a unique shape. Tina sat there was the ring resting in a pool of red wine against her flesh.
I wanted to ask you to marry me. Bette said quietly standing up and moving closer to Tina.
Did you? Bette nodded. And do you still? Tina asked, though she didnt move.
Bette nodded. I couldnt think of any other way Id like to spend the rest of my life than in your arms. Will you?
Yes. Tina whispered.
Bette smiled. She knelt down next to Tina and took her hand. Bette put Tinas hand into her mouth, sucking the wine out of her palm and scooping the ring up with her tongue. Tina shuddered and watched Bette take the ring out of her mouth and gently place is on Tinas finger. She stood up and offered a hand to Tina. Bette played with something under the table and music started playing. Bette led Tina to the open roof and they slowly danced under the stars.
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(58 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
wonderful as always fareast, waiting eagerly for the next.
K
Great chapter. Just love this story.
Amazing. I’ve been waiting impatiently as I always do for your next chapters. Please continueee!
please take your time with this story, they are so not ready for sex at all. I love this story and wish you would post sooner, but I can wait. keep going don’t listen to what people say it your story. I don’t understand why Tina is upset about the house?? maybe you could fill me in if I missing something, if not maybe it will be in future chapters
so happy to read you again! pls keep ’em coming. well done!
i am so bummed when i get to the end of one of your chapters, knowing that that is it for a while- but happy to know that there is more to come. thanks!!
Your pace is impeccable. Since the first chapter you’ve sustained wonderful writing. Not to mention the creative stories you manage to put together cohesively. You’re right about not rushing them into a physical encounter. Thanks so much!
Good, as always. Drag it out as long as you wish. I’m quite enjoying it too much to think of it ending.
Thanks for keeping it realistic and letting them take their time. Is the first paragraph a homage to the movie High Art? It reminds me so much of a scene from that movie.
Yeah, that opening was quite High Art like. Fareast, I LOVE your stories! You write really well, and your flashbacks in this story are just wonderful little glimpses of Bette and Tina’s past. Fab stuff!
Please take your time with this. I love every single line, every word. Nice way to end a superb weekend. Hmmmm, what has Tina so interested in this house?
WAHOOOOO We’re getting closer. We’re getting closer… I cannot wait…
This story is a treasure.
I was thrilled to see that you had posted another chapter. I’ve been craving this story. Good chapter.
You’re incredible. Please, follow your own pace. It’s very real. And just lovely. Thanks for posting another wonderful chapter.
you have woven an amazing story – thank you, I’m completely hooked.
That was so sweet and cute, loved it.
Thank you.
Lovely…please give us more.
This storyvis such a page-turner! I always find that I reach the end of each chapter quicker than I want to, always leaving me wanting more! Don’t change anything with the timing of your story because it flows so nicely the way you’ve been going. Thanks:D
Now Fareast…how cute is that. Just amazing and keep them chapters comming. Post soon
Wow, this was so cute, so romantic, so real..
i love this story, and believe me no one is in a hurry, take as much time as u need, as long as you’ll keep writing great chapters like this one..
This is great and your pace is just fine. Please continue!
i too like the pace that this story is taking, i’m happy you posted, i was getting antsy, i’ll admit :) keep up the wonderful work, please don’t keep us waiting long though!