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New feelings – Chapter 6
New feelings – Chapter 6
Previously.
Im gonna stay of her back for my brothers sake! He cares so deeply for me. Bette thought. They will probably date for just a week or two, if I know Jack right. Shes most likely not *****, Its not like I have a chance with her anyway! Friday is gonna be one of the hardest days of my life. Its not every day you see your crush date your brother.
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The rest of the week went by quickly. Bette kept as far away from Tina as she possibly could. She spent most her free time with her friends to keeping her mind of her, and whenever Jack started talking about her, Bette was quick to change the subject. It was only during the lunch breaks that Bette allowed her heart to take control. Bette often found herself staring at Tina sitting a few tables away with her friends chatting, and she could have sworn she caught Tina doing the same. But whenever they made eye contact they immediately looked away.
After arriving home from school on Friday afternoon Tina was a nervous wreck. It wasnt because of her date with Jack, but the thought of being in Bette Porters house made her heart hammer hard in her chest. What was I thinking? Offering to pick him up! Tina asked herself. Oh my god, what if Bette answers the door! But isnt that what I want? Tina was interrupted from her thoughts by her mothers voice entering the living room.
Hi Tina! Kirsten Kennard sat down beside her daughter on the couch. So are you gonna tell me about your date, Jack P… something wasnt it? She asked.
Its Porter, Jack Porter! Well it isnt really much to tell, I dont know him yet. Tina replied.
Well, you must know something! Her mother asked.
Tina sighed. Okay, lets seeHe is the football teams quarterback, really popular among the girls, hes handsome, and have a gorgeous twin sister named Bette. Just as the word slipped from her mouth, Tina turned in all shades of red. *****, did I just say gorgeous twin sister? *****! Tina thought. I mean everybody think she is beautiful, and shes very popular, and she was homecoming queen last year so the gorgeous part its pretty obvious and.
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(39 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
K
Great chapter. Wow, Bette is mean lol. Can’t wait for more.
Ay, Bette is mean as shit yo. Damn. Plz post soon.
hey ..great update..wow bette could really pop in matter of seconds……..post soon!!!!!!
Yaaaay you’re back atlast!!! :D Your story’s very addictive. Me like.
I loved it! thanx for posting! post another chapter soon, I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen between those two!
Oh snap , crackle, pop…this is getting good!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON
lol…lol!!! bring it on Porter. keep that mask in place all the time; otherwise, it’ll show your true face and feelings…now, we don’t want Tina to see it just yet right??? goodluck!
Another 5 wonderful stars for you my friend!
Damn! Bette really can be cruel ;] I missed you Sophie, welcome back!
This story puts a smile on my face. Thanks!!
I’m usually a silent reader, but I just wanted to say that your story is really great. You have a talent for enticing your reader and making us want more! Please post again soon!!
Great job on your story! I just started reading it from the beginning. I love it. Please post soon and greetings from Finland!
ooh! I can’t wait to see how Bette handles that kiss. Great buildup on the characters, you really give them such realistic emotions for two confused high school girls. I just hope Bette’s anger begins to disappear soon…I’m assuming Tina will eventually get to bring her shield down. Keep posting, I’ll be waiting to read.
dang u sophie88 ! u got me addicted ! now i’m gona need my fix everyday and u’ll have to do something abt it cuz its ur fault…:P
Great chapter. I know what it’s like to have your brother want to date your best friend whom you happen to love-though she didn’t know. When she sat out in the car with my brother for a couple hours talking, I was like Bette, pacing the house. I was really tough. I can understand where Bette is coming from. But her anger is not going to bring her closer to Tina. Cool out Bette!
Finally! You are back! Thank you! Great chapter!
Bette is acting like a little boy who has a crush on a girl. That kiss must have really killed Bette. I’m looking forward to more.
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and she just can’t stop said something mean and wrong to Tina but she didn’t meant it, it just come out of her mouth before she take it back. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Great writing. I hope there’s another chapter soon!!
Wow. I am totally loving the story. Please don’t make us wait to long. I want to know what happenes next.
Your killing me here with the clif hangers let bette be nice to her just a little please
sorry i had never commented before, but i lost then refound your story. i think it’s great :) bette is so mean, but you know, you’re right, sometimes the people who like you the most are the ones (well in high school) treat you poorly! i’m excited for the next chapter!