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New feelings – Chapter 6
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Jack stared at Bette. What did you do?
I..I didnt do anything. Bette said not meeting her brothers eyes.
Uh huh. Sure you didnt, because that would be so out of character for you sis! He said with disappointment written on his figures. He walked out and slammed the door in her face.
*****! Bette muttered! ***** ***** *****! What the ***** is wrong with me!
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Arriving at the planet Tina went to find a table while Jack went to order. She fund a place in the back, with the pool tables near by. Tinas heart was still racing from her confrontation with Bette. Why does she hate me so much? She asked herself. How can I have a crush on someone who hates me? In my dreams I see myself wrapped up in her strong arms while her soft lips caress mine. I guess that love will never exist.
Jack sat down by the table, placing Tinas strawberry milkshake in front of her. What did Bette say to you? Ill swear I will kick her *****.
Thanks, but dont worry about it! Tina smiled. So your dad is out of town? She asked trying to change the subject.
The next two hours they spent talking. Tina actually funded herself enjoying Jacks company. They talked about Jacks father and his many business trips, his mothers death and less serious stuff like their interests and school. But even though she enjoyed herself, Tinas thoughts stayed with Bette the whole evening.
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Back at the Porter residence, Bette had been walking around like crazy. She couldnt sit still if her life depended on it. She tried to pass the time with her homework, but was unable to concentrate. All she could think of was Tina. She was sitting at her desk lightly nibbling on the tip of her pencil, when she suddenly hurled the pencil across the room making it shattered against a wall. A moment later, her anger boiled over.
FUUUUCK! She screamed. You stupid idiot! She cursed herself. What the ***** is wrong with you? Youre acting like an *****. How are you ever gonna..
She stopped talking when she heard footsteps outside. She walked over and peered out the window. Seeing Jack and Tina standing outside the frontdoor.
They stood there staring at each other in complete silence. Jack voice was the first to fill the air.
Thanks for to night Tina! I had a really great time. You wanna meet up tomorrow?
Yeah sure! Tina smiled. I had great time!
They smiled at each other before Jack lend in for a kiss. It was sweet and tender. Pulling back he caressed her cheek. Ill call you tomorrow Tina! He smiled and went inside.
Tina stood still for few seconds running the tip of her index finger across her lip. Jack is a great kisser, but there was absolutely no spark. She thought. Not even a tingling in my stomach when our lips meet. Not even near the fuzzy feeling I get from only looking at Bette. She sighed, and started walking away from the door. Just as she turned back for one last glimpse of the house she saw the outline of a head of brown curls turning away from the secondfloor window.
TBC………
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Great chapter. Wow, Bette is mean lol. Can’t wait for more.
Ay, Bette is mean as shit yo. Damn. Plz post soon.
hey ..great update..wow bette could really pop in matter of seconds……..post soon!!!!!!
Yaaaay you’re back atlast!!! :D Your story’s very addictive. Me like.
I loved it! thanx for posting! post another chapter soon, I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen between those two!
Oh snap , crackle, pop…this is getting good!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON
lol…lol!!! bring it on Porter. keep that mask in place all the time; otherwise, it’ll show your true face and feelings…now, we don’t want Tina to see it just yet right??? goodluck!
Another 5 wonderful stars for you my friend!
Damn! Bette really can be cruel ;] I missed you Sophie, welcome back!
This story puts a smile on my face. Thanks!!
I’m usually a silent reader, but I just wanted to say that your story is really great. You have a talent for enticing your reader and making us want more! Please post again soon!!
Great job on your story! I just started reading it from the beginning. I love it. Please post soon and greetings from Finland!
ooh! I can’t wait to see how Bette handles that kiss. Great buildup on the characters, you really give them such realistic emotions for two confused high school girls. I just hope Bette’s anger begins to disappear soon…I’m assuming Tina will eventually get to bring her shield down. Keep posting, I’ll be waiting to read.
dang u sophie88 ! u got me addicted ! now i’m gona need my fix everyday and u’ll have to do something abt it cuz its ur fault…:P
Great chapter. I know what it’s like to have your brother want to date your best friend whom you happen to love-though she didn’t know. When she sat out in the car with my brother for a couple hours talking, I was like Bette, pacing the house. I was really tough. I can understand where Bette is coming from. But her anger is not going to bring her closer to Tina. Cool out Bette!
Finally! You are back! Thank you! Great chapter!
Bette is acting like a little boy who has a crush on a girl. That kiss must have really killed Bette. I’m looking forward to more.
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and she just can’t stop said something mean and wrong to Tina but she didn’t meant it, it just come out of her mouth before she take it back. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Great writing. I hope there’s another chapter soon!!
Wow. I am totally loving the story. Please don’t make us wait to long. I want to know what happenes next.
Your killing me here with the clif hangers let bette be nice to her just a little please
sorry i had never commented before, but i lost then refound your story. i think it’s great :) bette is so mean, but you know, you’re right, sometimes the people who like you the most are the ones (well in high school) treat you poorly! i’m excited for the next chapter!