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New feelings – Chapter 6
Tina you are babbling. Take it easy! I believe you! Im sure she is beautiful! Her mother reassured her.
Sorry! Just a little stressed out, with the date and all! Tina explained. She took a deep breath and stood up. Im gonna go get ready, dont wanna be late!
Okay sweetheart. Kirsten watched with a frown, as her daughter walked away. What was that all about? She wondered.
Tina laid flat down on her bed. That was close! She said in a whisper.
She relaxed for a few minutes, then showered, and changed into her planed wardrobe.
When she arrived at the Porter residence, she was in awe of the beautiful house. It wasnt very big, but defiantly a high class residence. The lawn was neatly mowed, but Tina notice there wasnt any flowers in the yard. It seemed the flowers had died with Bette and Jacks mother. She walked toward the big oak door, feeling her heart beat faster for each step closer she got.
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(Inside the house)
Bette walked into Jacks room as he was getting ready.
So whats the plan for your date? Bette asked sincerely curious.
Im taking her to this little trendy cafe I read about in the school news paper. The planet if I remember correctly.
Oh okay! She said giving a weak smile. That sounds greet! When are you gonna pick her up?
Well, its actually kinda strange, but she offered to pick me up. He said with his head inside the closet.
What!? Shes coming here? Bettes heart started racing faster.
Yep, shell be here around 6.
Bette looked down at her watch. Well, you better hurry, its exactly 6 now!
Just then the doorbell rang.
*****, Im not ready yet! Can you please open the door Bette? He said running out of the room with Bette close behind.
Wait! No.I Was all she managed to say before Jack closed the bathroom door in her face. *****! She muttered. She began walking down the stairs, feeling her heart beat faster for each step she took.
She took a deep breath before reaching for the door ***** with her hand shaking. She flung the door open.
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(39 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
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Great chapter. Wow, Bette is mean lol. Can’t wait for more.
Ay, Bette is mean as shit yo. Damn. Plz post soon.
hey ..great update..wow bette could really pop in matter of seconds……..post soon!!!!!!
Yaaaay you’re back atlast!!! :D Your story’s very addictive. Me like.
I loved it! thanx for posting! post another chapter soon, I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen between those two!
Oh snap , crackle, pop…this is getting good!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON
lol…lol!!! bring it on Porter. keep that mask in place all the time; otherwise, it’ll show your true face and feelings…now, we don’t want Tina to see it just yet right??? goodluck!
Another 5 wonderful stars for you my friend!
Damn! Bette really can be cruel ;] I missed you Sophie, welcome back!
This story puts a smile on my face. Thanks!!
I’m usually a silent reader, but I just wanted to say that your story is really great. You have a talent for enticing your reader and making us want more! Please post again soon!!
Great job on your story! I just started reading it from the beginning. I love it. Please post soon and greetings from Finland!
ooh! I can’t wait to see how Bette handles that kiss. Great buildup on the characters, you really give them such realistic emotions for two confused high school girls. I just hope Bette’s anger begins to disappear soon…I’m assuming Tina will eventually get to bring her shield down. Keep posting, I’ll be waiting to read.
dang u sophie88 ! u got me addicted ! now i’m gona need my fix everyday and u’ll have to do something abt it cuz its ur fault…:P
Great chapter. I know what it’s like to have your brother want to date your best friend whom you happen to love-though she didn’t know. When she sat out in the car with my brother for a couple hours talking, I was like Bette, pacing the house. I was really tough. I can understand where Bette is coming from. But her anger is not going to bring her closer to Tina. Cool out Bette!
Finally! You are back! Thank you! Great chapter!
Bette is acting like a little boy who has a crush on a girl. That kiss must have really killed Bette. I’m looking forward to more.
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and she just can’t stop said something mean and wrong to Tina but she didn’t meant it, it just come out of her mouth before she take it back. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Great writing. I hope there’s another chapter soon!!
Wow. I am totally loving the story. Please don’t make us wait to long. I want to know what happenes next.
Your killing me here with the clif hangers let bette be nice to her just a little please
sorry i had never commented before, but i lost then refound your story. i think it’s great :) bette is so mean, but you know, you’re right, sometimes the people who like you the most are the ones (well in high school) treat you poorly! i’m excited for the next chapter!