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New feelings – Chapter 6
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Standing in front of her was the girl of her dreams. Oh my god, shes so beautiful. Bette thought. Tina was wearing low cut jeans and a light pink tank. She had her hair down, and the soft blond hair had a hint of curls.
The two girls stood there completely frozen mesmerised by each others beauty. Tina was the first to break the silence.
You gonna let me in?
Bette snapped back to reality. Oh sorry! Yes of course! She stepped back to let Tina inside.
Ones Bette had closed the door, they stood in complete silence looking everywhere around but each other.
Sooo. Bette began.
Sooo.? Tina continued.
So. youre.youre going on a date with Jack? Bette blushed while she mentally slapped herself! Real smart Porter, like thats not obvious.
Thats correct! Tina said a little amused by Bettes sudden shyness. So what are you up to this evening? Tina asked trying to get a conversation rolling.
Not much. Just gonna stay here I guess. Our dads out of town on business, so Ill have the whole house for myself.
Oh okay. Just thought you had a date or something. So you dont have a boyfriend? Tina asked shyly.
At the mention of the word boyfriend Bettes protecting guard made full alarm.
Thats really none of your business! Bette snapped. You know Tina just because Jack likes you, God know why I might add. Well, that doesnt mean I feel the same way, and just so were clear we are not friends and were never gonna be friends!
Tina just stood there in shook feeling her heart breaking by each of Bettes words. She fought the tears starting to dwell in her eyes. She was about to speak when she heard Jack running down the stairs.
Hey Tina! Sorry to keep you waiting! So I fund this really cool caf in west hollywo. He stopped when he saw the hurt expression on Tinas face. You okay? He asked with a concerned tone.
Tina frown, holding back the tears. Yeah Im fine. So we really should get going. Bye Bette! Tina turned towards the door and rushed out.
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Great chapter. Wow, Bette is mean lol. Can’t wait for more.
Ay, Bette is mean as shit yo. Damn. Plz post soon.
hey ..great update..wow bette could really pop in matter of seconds……..post soon!!!!!!
Yaaaay you’re back atlast!!! :D Your story’s very addictive. Me like.
I loved it! thanx for posting! post another chapter soon, I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen between those two!
Oh snap , crackle, pop…this is getting good!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON
lol…lol!!! bring it on Porter. keep that mask in place all the time; otherwise, it’ll show your true face and feelings…now, we don’t want Tina to see it just yet right??? goodluck!
Another 5 wonderful stars for you my friend!
Damn! Bette really can be cruel ;] I missed you Sophie, welcome back!
This story puts a smile on my face. Thanks!!
I’m usually a silent reader, but I just wanted to say that your story is really great. You have a talent for enticing your reader and making us want more! Please post again soon!!
Great job on your story! I just started reading it from the beginning. I love it. Please post soon and greetings from Finland!
ooh! I can’t wait to see how Bette handles that kiss. Great buildup on the characters, you really give them such realistic emotions for two confused high school girls. I just hope Bette’s anger begins to disappear soon…I’m assuming Tina will eventually get to bring her shield down. Keep posting, I’ll be waiting to read.
dang u sophie88 ! u got me addicted ! now i’m gona need my fix everyday and u’ll have to do something abt it cuz its ur fault…:P
Great chapter. I know what it’s like to have your brother want to date your best friend whom you happen to love-though she didn’t know. When she sat out in the car with my brother for a couple hours talking, I was like Bette, pacing the house. I was really tough. I can understand where Bette is coming from. But her anger is not going to bring her closer to Tina. Cool out Bette!
Finally! You are back! Thank you! Great chapter!
Bette is acting like a little boy who has a crush on a girl. That kiss must have really killed Bette. I’m looking forward to more.
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and she just can’t stop said something mean and wrong to Tina but she didn’t meant it, it just come out of her mouth before she take it back. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Great writing. I hope there’s another chapter soon!!
Wow. I am totally loving the story. Please don’t make us wait to long. I want to know what happenes next.
Your killing me here with the clif hangers let bette be nice to her just a little please
sorry i had never commented before, but i lost then refound your story. i think it’s great :) bette is so mean, but you know, you’re right, sometimes the people who like you the most are the ones (well in high school) treat you poorly! i’m excited for the next chapter!