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    Vignettes: Chapter 51

    Story written on July 3, 2005 by fareast.
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    How to be a mom

     

     

     

     

    Dakota, I am giving you to the count of three to get into that bath tub before you are in big trouble!  Tina shouted from the kitchen as she heard Dakota running down the hallway, her bear feet slapping the hard wood.  Suddenly she heard silence.  Tina walked into the bathroom, leaving the food she was preparing in the kitchen.  The tub was still full of water, but it was empty other than that.

     

    Thats it young lady!  Im going back into the kitchen and if you arent in the tub by the time I come back in here, you are grounded!  Tina left the bathroom and walked into the kitchen, opening the oven to check on the brownies.  She pulled them out and left them on a cooling wrack.  She topped the salad off with salmon and set it aside.  Tina quietly moved back to the bathroom and still saw it empty.  She walked back into the kitchen because she realized she forgot to turn the oven off.

     

    Dakota!  I want you in the kitchen in three seconds…. one…. two…. three!

     

    Here I am mommy.  Dakota peeked around the corner into the hallway, completely naked except for a towel wrapped around her shoulders like a cape.  Her cheeks were flushed and her blonde hair was curled all around her face. 

     

    Why arent you in the bath tub?  Tina demanded, hand on her hip.

     

    I dont want a bath.  Dakotas brown eyes sparkles like her mothers.

     

    I didnt ask you if you wanted one.  Its not a choice.  You are taking a bath.

     

    How about in five minutes?  Dakota tried to bargain with her mom.

     

    How about now?  Both Tina and Dakota looked towards the door and saw Bette standing there.  She had walked in when Dakota first entered the room.

     

    Bette!  Dakota squealed, jumping up and down.  Mommy made brownies for tonight!

     

    I dont eat brownies with little girls who dont take baths.  Bette crossed her arms over her chest and didnt move.  She wanted to run across the room and grab Dakota in her arms and hug her.  But, she stood still trying to be firm.

     

    Why not?

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    3. Damn you are so good at this! You have their characters down so well. I loved the dialog at the planet with all of them using analogies so Dakota doesn’t catch on. Brownies are my favorite btw!

    8. Once a favorite – always a favorite!
      Thanks for the wonderful chapter – I can relate, my girls need some encouagement to get into the bath as well. Loved the brownies – they sound really yummy.

      Please continue and … well… you know about the whole cookies thing! 5 bright and sparlkly ones this time.

    12. I have loved this story – how you have had the reconnection unfold. I hope you feel the desire to continue because it is a gem. However if you are ready for a new story – I know it will be just as well written and full of such wonderful dialogue and character development. Happy holiday to you – thanks for the post.

    13. Thanks for continuing this story! The real-life Dakota in the flesh is endearing! I’m glad they are taking their time, letting her get adjusted to Bette being in both of their lives again.
      P.S.: About the formatting, don’t sweat the small stuff. This story is so good I don’t mind parsing through the forest of words. Thanks!

    19. Fareast don’t worry about the formatting, you just keep doing what your doing, and making all us readers happy. love this story but then again you know we all do. thanks fareast.

    22. Fareast,
      I can only add to the well earned praise and recognition of your fabulous and fantastic fan fiction. This is one on my personal favourites. As it puts a big grin on my face after each chapter.
      The characters have been molded and shaped in to real living and breathing people. Your dialogue and characterizations sparkle with wit and honest reactions. Their rapport is a testament to your flair for sentiment and friendship as well as damn fine writing.
      All of the girls are true to their screen essences and Dakota is a worthy addition to this group.
      I adore and admire the way you have continued this story and kept it both innovative and intriguing.
      I can’t wait for your next post as I am delighted to see how this will turn out.
      Many thanks
      Your loyal fan

    23. For sure keep going. It is a great story – very realistic. I know there are lots of folks enjoying this, including me. The formatting is a bit off but its not a problem.

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