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    Vignettes: Chapter 51

     

    Because they stink.  I think you should listen to your mother and take a bath.  Otherwise youll end up spending the night in your room while your mommy and I eat all the brownies and ice cream while we watch the Powerpuff Girls all by ourselves.

     

    Dakota scowled and frowned at Bette before turning around and sulkily walking to the bathroom very slowly.  Not fair, she mumbled. 

     

    Bette and Tina didnt move until they heard the splashing of water. 

     

    Thank you.  Tina whispered as she took out two plates for the salad.  She scooped out two helpings and handed one to Bette before sitting at the table.

     

    Do you think she hates me?  Bette whispered back, worry in her eyes.

     

    Tina smiled softly.  Of course not, Bette.  If anything, in the long run she will respect you more.  Its not easy disciplining but you have to.

     

    But she seemed so disappointed in me.

     

    I bet by the time she comes back out, itll be out of her mind.  Tina replied, eating.

     

    I hope so.  I dont want her to be mad at me.  Bettes voice still carried a worried tone.

     

    Tina reached across the table and placed her hand on top of Bettes.  I love you.  Her face immediately flushed.

     

    Bette looked at her and smiled.  I havent heard you say that in… lets see… eight years?

     

    Just because you never heard me say it doesnt mean I didnt feel it.  Tina responded.  I dont know where that just came from, Bette.

     

    You never have to explain your feelings to me, T.  I love you too.  Hows that?  Bette squeezed Tinas hand.

     

    I love you too, mommy!  Dakota came into the room and bounced into Tinas lap.  She was dressed in a blue pajama outfit and her hair was wet.

     

    You do?  What about Bette?

     

    I love Bette, too!  Dakota jumped out of Tinas lap and made her way towards Bettes, climbing up until she was nestled in her arms.  Bette breathed in the little girl in her lap.  She smelled like strawberries and lavender.  The berry was from the bath and the lavender was from the pajamas.  Tina liked to keep lavender in Dakotas pajama drawer as a calming scent to linger on her pajamas before bed.

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    Comments

    1. Damn you are so good at this! You have their characters down so well. I loved the dialog at the planet with all of them using analogies so Dakota doesn’t catch on. Brownies are my favorite btw!

    2. Once a favorite – always a favorite!
      Thanks for the wonderful chapter – I can relate, my girls need some encouagement to get into the bath as well. Loved the brownies – they sound really yummy.

      Please continue and … well… you know about the whole cookies thing! 5 bright and sparlkly ones this time.

    3. I have loved this story – how you have had the reconnection unfold. I hope you feel the desire to continue because it is a gem. However if you are ready for a new story – I know it will be just as well written and full of such wonderful dialogue and character development. Happy holiday to you – thanks for the post.

    4. Thanks for continuing this story! The real-life Dakota in the flesh is endearing! I’m glad they are taking their time, letting her get adjusted to Bette being in both of their lives again.
      P.S.: About the formatting, don’t sweat the small stuff. This story is so good I don’t mind parsing through the forest of words. Thanks!

    5. Fareast don’t worry about the formatting, you just keep doing what your doing, and making all us readers happy. love this story but then again you know we all do. thanks fareast.

    6. Fareast,
      I can only add to the well earned praise and recognition of your fabulous and fantastic fan fiction. This is one on my personal favourites. As it puts a big grin on my face after each chapter.
      The characters have been molded and shaped in to real living and breathing people. Your dialogue and characterizations sparkle with wit and honest reactions. Their rapport is a testament to your flair for sentiment and friendship as well as damn fine writing.
      All of the girls are true to their screen essences and Dakota is a worthy addition to this group.
      I adore and admire the way you have continued this story and kept it both innovative and intriguing.
      I can’t wait for your next post as I am delighted to see how this will turn out.
      Many thanks
      Your loyal fan

    7. For sure keep going. It is a great story – very realistic. I know there are lots of folks enjoying this, including me. The formatting is a bit off but its not a problem.

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