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Vignettes: Chapter 51
I love you! Bette glowed. You smell so good I cant believe youre the same
girl who was just out here a while ago.
Im clean. Dakota showed Bette her pruned hands.
Ready to get messy with a brownie? Bette asked.
Dakota nodded and grinned.
Ok, sweetie, go snuggle up on the couch and Ill bring out your snack. Tina instructed her daughter.
She ran to the living room and turned on the tv, ready to watch her favorite cartoon.
Tina wrapped an arm around Bette in the kitchen and whispered in her ear. Told you so.
Bette raised an eyebrow and quickly kissed her before heading to the living room with Dakota. Tina handed a plate to both of them and sat herself on the other side of Dakota. Bette was on the opposite side.
When the show was over, Dakota took both Bette and Tinas hands in her tiny hands. Mommy, is Bette staying over tonight for another sleepover?
Tina glanced at Bette over Dakotas head and raised her eyebrows. They still hadnt talked to the little girl about their relationship. Tina then realized they needed to sit down and talk to her about it.
No, not tonight, honey. Tina quickly replied.
Why not?
Well, the couch really isnt all that comfortable. Bette said.
You can sleep in my bed. Dakota replied.
Bette smiled. Thanks for the offer, but Ill see you tomorrow morning at breakfast, wont I? Every Saturday morning they met with Alice and Dana at the local coffee shop for breakfast.
Yes.
Ok, Dakota, honey its time for you to go to bed. Tina said, standing up. Say goodbye to Bette and head to your room. Ill be in in a few minutes to read you a story and tuck you in.
Dakota reluctantly stood and hugged Bette who bent down to be at eye level with the girl. Dakota kissed her on the cheek and ran down the hallway. Bette was glowing when she stood back up.
That girl reminds me so much of you sometimes. Bette said as she let out a sigh. She looks just like you. Shes going to break hearts someday.
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(52 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
You make me so happy :) I can’t tell you how much I love this story. Thanks for considering extending it for all of your loyal fans :)
Excellent chapter. I hope Dakota understands.
Damn you are so good at this! You have their characters down so well. I loved the dialog at the planet with all of them using analogies so Dakota doesn’t catch on. Brownies are my favorite btw!
just beautiful…i love Dakota and i´m pretty sure she will love Bette as a mom..please post soon i cant wait for more..thanks :-)
this is a great family story…keep the updates coming….post soon!!!
Please do not worry about the format thing – I’m just so glad to see you have posted – now on to read your story.
Happy 4TH!
I just love this story it’s so sweet.Can’t wait for the next.
Once a favorite – always a favorite!
Thanks for the wonderful chapter – I can relate, my girls need some encouagement to get into the bath as well. Loved the brownies – they sound really yummy.
Please continue and … well… you know about the whole cookies thing! 5 bright and sparlkly ones this time.
oh hurray! you’re continuing this story. i love dakota, what a cute character :) thanks for continuing it :)
K
What a perfect chapter, so sweet. Hope all goes well. LOVE this.
Always glad to read this. Time for Dakota to get used to the idea that the sleepovers are becoming permanent.
I have loved this story – how you have had the reconnection unfold. I hope you feel the desire to continue because it is a gem. However if you are ready for a new story – I know it will be just as well written and full of such wonderful dialogue and character development. Happy holiday to you – thanks for the post.
Thanks for continuing this story! The real-life Dakota in the flesh is endearing! I’m glad they are taking their time, letting her get adjusted to Bette being in both of their lives again.
P.S.: About the formatting, don’t sweat the small stuff. This story is so good I don’t mind parsing through the forest of words. Thanks!
Thanks for stickin around for a little longer. I’ll keep reading if you keep writing.
Glad u’ll continue writing, i will read as long as u write ;)
absolutly great… can’t wait to see how our lil friend will react!!!
Why do I have the feeling that Dakota will let them know she knows before they do? ;)
I can’t wait for them to all live together.
“Untying all the knots? Three passengers?†You’re amazing. Thanks
Fareast don’t worry about the formatting, you just keep doing what your doing, and making all us readers happy. love this story but then again you know we all do. thanks fareast.
love the trip you have taken us on…please continue!
I certainly join with all your fans who love this story. Always looked for and always appreciated. Thanks for continuing it.
Fareast,
I can only add to the well earned praise and recognition of your fabulous and fantastic fan fiction. This is one on my personal favourites. As it puts a big grin on my face after each chapter.
The characters have been molded and shaped in to real living and breathing people. Your dialogue and characterizations sparkle with wit and honest reactions. Their rapport is a testament to your flair for sentiment and friendship as well as damn fine writing.
All of the girls are true to their screen essences and Dakota is a worthy addition to this group.
I adore and admire the way you have continued this story and kept it both innovative and intriguing.
I can’t wait for your next post as I am delighted to see how this will turn out.
Many thanks
Your loyal fan
For sure keep going. It is a great story – very realistic. I know there are lots of folks enjoying this, including me. The formatting is a bit off but its not a problem.
great as usual! hope that there’s a lot more to this story of yours.
Fareast I simply love your story. You always make me smile. Can´t wait for the next step. Post soon
Another Wonderful Chapter! Thank you