Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
Vignettes: Chapter 51
Someday. But not for a long time. Tina replied as they headed towards the door. I think its time we told her about us.
Bette bit her bottom lip and let out a long breath. I know. I think you should be the one to tell her, though.
Tina shook her head. No. I may be her biological mother, but you are turning into her mother as well. She admires and loves you, Bette. Lets talk to her together. You have so much insight and input to share. She needs to hear it from you as well. Let her know you are here for her just as much as you are for me.
Ill need your help. Bette whispered. I am so afraid of doing or saying something that will make her hate me. I just love her so much. I never knew I could love someone so much in the way that I do her. Bettes eyes threatened tears.
Tina wrapped her arms around Bettes neck and smiled. You are adorable, Bette Porter. Tina kissed her. You are going turning into the perfect mother. Unless you leave and never come back, Dakota will love you unconditionally.
Really?
Im not saying it wont be hard, but you will always be in her heart. I guarantee it. They kissed again.
Mommy! They abruptly pulled away from each other when they heard Dakota shout from her bedroom.
Duty calls. Tina laughed.
Til tomorrow?
Tina winked and closed the door, resting her head against the wood before tucking in her daughter.
The Planet was bustling with women on Saturday morning. Tina and Dakota were sitting in the back corner, Tina reading the newspaper and Dakota turning the pages of a book. Alice and Dana walked in and sat down at the table with them.
Hello ladies. Alice said.
Good morning. Dana said as she yawned.
Tired? Tina asked.
Exhausted. Ive been training all week. This is the first day off Ive had in almost two weeks.
Poor thing. Alice patted her on the arm.
Alice, you look exceptionally chipper today. Tina arched an eyebrow at her. How was your evening last night?
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


(52 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
You make me so happy :) I can’t tell you how much I love this story. Thanks for considering extending it for all of your loyal fans :)
Excellent chapter. I hope Dakota understands.
Damn you are so good at this! You have their characters down so well. I loved the dialog at the planet with all of them using analogies so Dakota doesn’t catch on. Brownies are my favorite btw!
just beautiful…i love Dakota and i´m pretty sure she will love Bette as a mom..please post soon i cant wait for more..thanks :-)
this is a great family story…keep the updates coming….post soon!!!
Please do not worry about the format thing – I’m just so glad to see you have posted – now on to read your story.
Happy 4TH!
I just love this story it’s so sweet.Can’t wait for the next.
Once a favorite – always a favorite!
Thanks for the wonderful chapter – I can relate, my girls need some encouagement to get into the bath as well. Loved the brownies – they sound really yummy.
Please continue and … well… you know about the whole cookies thing! 5 bright and sparlkly ones this time.
oh hurray! you’re continuing this story. i love dakota, what a cute character :) thanks for continuing it :)
K
What a perfect chapter, so sweet. Hope all goes well. LOVE this.
Always glad to read this. Time for Dakota to get used to the idea that the sleepovers are becoming permanent.
I have loved this story – how you have had the reconnection unfold. I hope you feel the desire to continue because it is a gem. However if you are ready for a new story – I know it will be just as well written and full of such wonderful dialogue and character development. Happy holiday to you – thanks for the post.
Thanks for continuing this story! The real-life Dakota in the flesh is endearing! I’m glad they are taking their time, letting her get adjusted to Bette being in both of their lives again.
P.S.: About the formatting, don’t sweat the small stuff. This story is so good I don’t mind parsing through the forest of words. Thanks!
Thanks for stickin around for a little longer. I’ll keep reading if you keep writing.
Glad u’ll continue writing, i will read as long as u write ;)
absolutly great… can’t wait to see how our lil friend will react!!!
Why do I have the feeling that Dakota will let them know she knows before they do? ;)
I can’t wait for them to all live together.
“Untying all the knots? Three passengers?†You’re amazing. Thanks
Fareast don’t worry about the formatting, you just keep doing what your doing, and making all us readers happy. love this story but then again you know we all do. thanks fareast.
love the trip you have taken us on…please continue!
I certainly join with all your fans who love this story. Always looked for and always appreciated. Thanks for continuing it.
Fareast,
I can only add to the well earned praise and recognition of your fabulous and fantastic fan fiction. This is one on my personal favourites. As it puts a big grin on my face after each chapter.
The characters have been molded and shaped in to real living and breathing people. Your dialogue and characterizations sparkle with wit and honest reactions. Their rapport is a testament to your flair for sentiment and friendship as well as damn fine writing.
All of the girls are true to their screen essences and Dakota is a worthy addition to this group.
I adore and admire the way you have continued this story and kept it both innovative and intriguing.
I can’t wait for your next post as I am delighted to see how this will turn out.
Many thanks
Your loyal fan
For sure keep going. It is a great story – very realistic. I know there are lots of folks enjoying this, including me. The formatting is a bit off but its not a problem.
great as usual! hope that there’s a lot more to this story of yours.
Fareast I simply love your story. You always make me smile. Can´t wait for the next step. Post soon
Another Wonderful Chapter! Thank you