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    Bette Forgets 58

    Ben

     

     

    I was watching Bette pace back and forth in the living room.  She would occasionally sit down when the pacing got too much or one of us convinced her to sit down.  Currently she was in with the boys trying to get them back to sleep.  I was sitting in the living room along with the girls.  The doorbell rang and I went up to get it.  I saw an older couple standing on the doorstep.

     

    “You must be Tina’s parents,” I say softly, “Please come in.”

     

    I usher in Maureen and Laurence Kennard.  They follow me into the living room where hugs go all around.

     

    “Where is Bette,” Maureen asks

     

    “She is getting the boys to sleep,” Shane comments, “They seem to know that mama isn’t here.”

     

    Maureen nodded at this and I can tell that it was taking every ounce of her control not to burst into tears.  She and Laurence were gripping hands together tightly.

     

    “Do we know anything yet,” Laurence asks me

     

    “We know that she went out to get some ice for the party and somewhere between there and home she was taken.  We found her car in the grocery store parking lot.  We’re having it fingerprinted and so far we’ve only gotten prints of everyone that is sitting in this room.”

     

    Laurence nodded and glanced around at the girls.

     

    “Tina likes to drive a lot of the time and we just pile in,” Dana comments softly

     

    “I wasn’t suspecting any of you,” Laurence remarks just as softly, “This is justwe just found her again.  I don’t want to lose her.”

     

    “And we’re not going to.”

     

    This is said from above us and we all look up to see Bette coming down the stairs.  She had changed into a pair of yoga pants and a long sleeved shirt.

     

    “We are going to find her and everything is going to be okay.”

     

    As she walks closer to us Maureen and Laurence they both get up and pull Bette into a tight hug.

     

    “I’m so sorry,” Bette whispers

     

    “What do you have to be sorry for,” Maureen asks

     

    Bette sighs as she pulls away and takes a seat next to me.

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    Comments

    1. Dude WTF!! were you fucking with me when you told me?? if so I will be one pissed off reader. It better not be carmen cause I called her out a long time ago.

    2. Everybody is officially obsessed with Bette.

      Carmen is the crazy-psycho stalker here because Shane is supposedly in love with Bette. Dana is probably the insane-obsessed-bitch behind all atrocities in that other story, Hidden Feelings… (well, the insane-obsessed-bitch has still not been revealed but is probably part of the group too… and also acting out of jealousy) and whoever planned it is also using James and Candance cause they are “in love” with Bette.
      Alice is acting like a hormone-driven-teenager in Renewed Trust, shouting out Bette’s name when… she shouldn’t!
      Even Helena had a son with Bette in some other story!!! I mean… even HELENA PEABODY!!!

      O.O

      You know what, Tina, you could come stay with me. I’ve always loved you more anyway =P

      *lol*

    3. WILLOWR – come to my house, please. that cracked the shit out of me. i think we could have lots to laugh and talk about. sorry, i digress.

      ok im not sure why its carmen, but im sure youll tell us. and being obsessed with bette i total understand. dont let tina get to hurt, shes just so sweet. and poor bette, wont know what to do with herself. post soon. my personal request, i love this story, but please can you find it in your heart to post some more, damn, i cant remember the name of the story, where bette has all those kids. i love that story. thanks again.

    4. reba, Finally had to comment after months of reading your most excellent fanfic! I paused after each page to digest more and more of the clues, when I got done reading your last chapter, I was convinced that it was Bette’s mom, only cuz the person talked about giving birth to children and Tina not knowing anything about it. After Tina tried to mentioned what I’m assuming to be Shane’s name to “the captor” that was when I decided it was Carmen, because I figured that Shane was the name not to be mentioned. And you already commented about the attraction between Bette and Shane. So…wonderful! Every single one of you fanfic writers have been making me use my brain to figure out mysteries. I totally LOL at Willowr because she is right in renewed trust Alice has been having not so friendship feelings toward Bette, in Hidden Feelings, Bette is kidnapped and as Willowr suggested I think it was Dana, and lets not forget Sox’s fantastic mystery-Breathe. jesus if I wanted this much brain activity I would have went back to school! Can’t wait for more, Hope Bette figures out who it is soon.

    5. I CAUGHT UP!!I’M SO HAPPY THAT I DID, AHHHHH.I’VE SUSPECTED CARMEN FOR A LONG TIME, DON’T EVEN KNOW WHY. JUST FOR A LONG TIMEEEE!AHHH sorry for all caps, I’m just so insanely drawn into this!CONTINUE MY LOVE <3333

    6. Damn this is getting more interesting and scarry, it’s true that is Carmen or Shane maybe not, oh Jenny I think we miessed that one on the list. Post soon please, thanks!

    7. Hey RK,
      Carmen certainly was a ‘trusted friend’ so I am sure with your talent that the reasoning behind this twist set of circumstances will slowly be revealed.
      I can hardly breathe at the moment given the shock of this revelation.
      Brilliant narrative as always; each character has their own voice in your story and that little (or big) bit different from the show.
      Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    8. Well done as usual Reba! I enjoyed the clue you gave along the way… ““You still don’t have any idea of who this person could be,” Carmen asks of Bette”

    9. I only post rarely..but I gotta say I feel like a genius lol. The second she said “you know nothing would’ve happened” I knew it was Carmen..and now i’m just upset because personally I love her!

    10. Well done Reba, I yelled out 5 names before I shut up and just read the chapter. And Carmen wasn’t one of them.
      I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more

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