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Bette Forgets 58
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“We don’t know if it was them,” I say to Bette
“I feel it in my bones Ben. It was.”
“Who are you talking about,” Laurence asks
Bette takes in a deep breath, “I have a stalker. This person has been getting bolder as of late with their threats and such.”
“You feel this person took Christina,” Laurence starts, “Why?”
Bette shrugs her shoulders at this, “That I’m not too sure on but one thing I’d bet my life on is that this person has Tina.”
“You still don’t have any idea of who this person could be,” Carmen asks of Bette
“I think Porter would have spoken up before now,” Alice exclaims
“I mean I have ideas but I don’t know.”
Bette
Boy do I ever have ideas but I don’t have any concrete proof of anything. Almost everyone that was at the party is still here. I still feel the presence but I haven’t narrowed it down to whom it is. Damn it!
If I had figured it out sooner Tina would still be here with me. It sickens me that the person that took Tina is sitting here with me, trying to help me find my love. They have to be psychotic to even behave normally. As I look from person to person I try to think on whether any of them would have motive to not only stalk me but to kidnap Tina.
I look to Alice, my dearest friend. We’ve been through a lot together. Good times and bad. Ups and downs. She has done a lot of things to me in our long friendship but could she do something like this? No.
Shane. Sweet Shane whom I’ve known for a while now too. I’m probably closest to Shane that anyone in the group. We have so much in common. Sometimes I think we have more in common than any two people. If I didn’t have Tina in my life I sometimes think that I would like to see where things between us would go.
My eyes fall to Carmen who is rubbing Shane’s hand. The two of them are so amazing together. I’m glad Shane has finally found that special someone. I’m not going to let the best thing that ever happened to her slip between her fingers. Carmen doesn’t have a mean bone in her body.
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Why??????
So who is it…Dana?? Sorry…did I miss something??
Oh…oops…I didn’t see the Carmen until after I posted. Okay, now I am on the same page!
Dude WTF!! were you fucking with me when you told me?? if so I will be one pissed off reader. It better not be carmen cause I called her out a long time ago.
Everybody is officially obsessed with Bette.
Carmen is the crazy-psycho stalker here because Shane is supposedly in love with Bette. Dana is probably the insane-obsessed-bitch behind all atrocities in that other story, Hidden Feelings… (well, the insane-obsessed-bitch has still not been revealed but is probably part of the group too… and also acting out of jealousy) and whoever planned it is also using James and Candance cause they are “in love” with Bette.
Alice is acting like a hormone-driven-teenager in Renewed Trust, shouting out Bette’s name when… she shouldn’t!
Even Helena had a son with Bette in some other story!!! I mean… even HELENA PEABODY!!!
O.O
You know what, Tina, you could come stay with me. I’ve always loved you more anyway =P
*lol*
WILLOWR – come to my house, please. that cracked the shit out of me. i think we could have lots to laugh and talk about. sorry, i digress.
ok im not sure why its carmen, but im sure youll tell us. and being obsessed with bette i total understand. dont let tina get to hurt, shes just so sweet. and poor bette, wont know what to do with herself. post soon. my personal request, i love this story, but please can you find it in your heart to post some more, damn, i cant remember the name of the story, where bette has all those kids. i love that story. thanks again.
whoa…i dont even know what to say at this point.i was seriously thinking it was the shrink.
fucking crazy please post again asap 5 stars! Damn’s Carmen!That’s screw poor, poor Shane!
reba, Finally had to comment after months of reading your most excellent fanfic! I paused after each page to digest more and more of the clues, when I got done reading your last chapter, I was convinced that it was Bette’s mom, only cuz the person talked about giving birth to children and Tina not knowing anything about it. After Tina tried to mentioned what I’m assuming to be Shane’s name to “the captor” that was when I decided it was Carmen, because I figured that Shane was the name not to be mentioned. And you already commented about the attraction between Bette and Shane. So…wonderful! Every single one of you fanfic writers have been making me use my brain to figure out mysteries. I totally LOL at Willowr because she is right in renewed trust Alice has been having not so friendship feelings toward Bette, in Hidden Feelings, Bette is kidnapped and as Willowr suggested I think it was Dana, and lets not forget Sox’s fantastic mystery-Breathe. jesus if I wanted this much brain activity I would have went back to school! Can’t wait for more, Hope Bette figures out who it is soon.
Wow Carmen. i would never had guessed her. great writing. post soon
Please please please please no more harm to Bette I think she has taken all that the one person can take
I CAUGHT UP!!I’M SO HAPPY THAT I DID, AHHHHH.I’VE SUSPECTED CARMEN FOR A LONG TIME, DON’T EVEN KNOW WHY. JUST FOR A LONG TIMEEEE!AHHH sorry for all caps, I’m just so insanely drawn into this!CONTINUE MY LOVE <3333
Damn this is getting more interesting and scarry, it’s true that is Carmen or Shane maybe not, oh Jenny I think we miessed that one on the list. Post soon please, thanks!
Well, that was quite a surprise. Never guessed Carmen. Very interesting!
Well, that was quite a surprise. Never guessed Carmen. Very interesting!
Well I didn’t expect that but I’ll like to see where you take this. Good Job.
Fucking MARVELOUS…THANKS POST SOON….
Hey RK,
Carmen certainly was a ‘trusted friend’ so I am sure with your talent that the reasoning behind this twist set of circumstances will slowly be revealed.
I can hardly breathe at the moment given the shock of this revelation.
Brilliant narrative as always; each character has their own voice in your story and that little (or big) bit different from the show.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
Well done as usual Reba! I enjoyed the clue you gave along the way… ““You still don’t have any idea of who this person could be,” Carmen asks of Bette”
I only post rarely..but I gotta say I feel like a genius lol. The second she said “you know nothing would’ve happened” I knew it was Carmen..and now i’m just upset because personally I love her!
K
Excellent chapter. Never guessed Carmen. I hope B and T will both come out of this ok. Love it.
Well done Reba, I yelled out 5 names before I shut up and just read the chapter. And Carmen wasn’t one of them.
I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more