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Bette Forgets 58
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“What are you talking about?”
“You do not see it Tina, for you are too close. Those around her can’t help but fall in love with her.”
“That’s insane,” I say, “No one is in love with Bette.”
“My poor little nave Tina. Of course people are in love with Bette.”
“Name someone!”
There is silence at this statement and I almost smile realizing that I may have caught my captor.
“Ben.”
“Ben isn’t in love with Bette,” I exclaim, “He’s madly in love with his wife.”
“Doesn’t mean he’s not in love with Bette.”
I’m never going to believe that Ben is in love with Bette and I shake my head.
“Give me another example.”
My captor chuckles at this. I once again feel the warmth of a body pressing closer to me, and a name is whispered in my ear. I don’t say anything as I feel my captor pull away from me.
“This you’ve seen,” my captor breathes
I don’t say anything.
“Yes, this you’ve seen,” they repeat in a tone of voice that makes me think that they feel they’ve been vindicated somehow
“Is this what drove you tothis,” I say waiving one of my shackled hands around thus bringing it back to life
“It is,” my captor starts, “The main thing that drove me to this.”
“You know nothing would ever have happened.”
I hear a heavy sigh come from my captor.
“Of this I’m aware but do you know how hard it is to constantly live with the fact that the person that you love is in love with someone else. It doesn’t matter if nothing would ever happen. It’s enough that they will never completely be in love with you!”
I suck in a breath at this, “But you didn’t have to do any of this,” I say with as much conviction as I can, “You could have just walked away.”
“Could you walk away from Bette?”
“This is different. I’ve been with Bette for a long time. My life is too intertwined with hers to even think about leaving. You’ve known”
“Don’t say the name,” my captor forcefully states
I snap my mouth closed at this.
“Don’t say the name,” my captor says a little more softly, “I don’t want to hear the name ever again.”
“Butthis person,” I almost said the name and I figured it best no to provoke my captor, “Is the reason we’re here, the reason that you so” oh ***** with it, “Went off your rocker.”
I expected to be hit again but nothing comes.
“That very well may be but it doesn’t mean I want to hear the name.”
I nod my head conceding that point, “It’s not to late to just walk away from all of this. You can let me go. Disappear into the sunset, so to speak and I won’t ever tell anyone that you were the one that was stalking Bette or the one that kidnapped me. You can start fresh somewhere else.”
There is silence for a long moment after. I’m hoping that I finally convinced my captor to let me go.
“I can’t do that Tina,” is said so softly that I almost didn’t hear it
“Why the ***** not!”
“I need to finish it.”
I hear shuffling and hear the creak of the stairs.
“No, you can’t finish it,” I yell, “That would mean that you’re going to go after Bette. Come back here!”
“I’m sorry Tina.”
“Hey come back here,” I yell hearing my captor ascend the stairs, “Come back here! Please come back.”
I hear the door creak open and close with the loud sound of the deadbolt to follow.
“CARMEN!!”
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Why??????
So who is it…Dana?? Sorry…did I miss something??
Oh…oops…I didn’t see the Carmen until after I posted. Okay, now I am on the same page!
Dude WTF!! were you fucking with me when you told me?? if so I will be one pissed off reader. It better not be carmen cause I called her out a long time ago.
Everybody is officially obsessed with Bette.
Carmen is the crazy-psycho stalker here because Shane is supposedly in love with Bette. Dana is probably the insane-obsessed-bitch behind all atrocities in that other story, Hidden Feelings… (well, the insane-obsessed-bitch has still not been revealed but is probably part of the group too… and also acting out of jealousy) and whoever planned it is also using James and Candance cause they are “in love” with Bette.
Alice is acting like a hormone-driven-teenager in Renewed Trust, shouting out Bette’s name when… she shouldn’t!
Even Helena had a son with Bette in some other story!!! I mean… even HELENA PEABODY!!!
O.O
You know what, Tina, you could come stay with me. I’ve always loved you more anyway =P
*lol*
WILLOWR – come to my house, please. that cracked the shit out of me. i think we could have lots to laugh and talk about. sorry, i digress.
ok im not sure why its carmen, but im sure youll tell us. and being obsessed with bette i total understand. dont let tina get to hurt, shes just so sweet. and poor bette, wont know what to do with herself. post soon. my personal request, i love this story, but please can you find it in your heart to post some more, damn, i cant remember the name of the story, where bette has all those kids. i love that story. thanks again.
whoa…i dont even know what to say at this point.i was seriously thinking it was the shrink.
fucking crazy please post again asap 5 stars! Damn’s Carmen!That’s screw poor, poor Shane!
reba, Finally had to comment after months of reading your most excellent fanfic! I paused after each page to digest more and more of the clues, when I got done reading your last chapter, I was convinced that it was Bette’s mom, only cuz the person talked about giving birth to children and Tina not knowing anything about it. After Tina tried to mentioned what I’m assuming to be Shane’s name to “the captor” that was when I decided it was Carmen, because I figured that Shane was the name not to be mentioned. And you already commented about the attraction between Bette and Shane. So…wonderful! Every single one of you fanfic writers have been making me use my brain to figure out mysteries. I totally LOL at Willowr because she is right in renewed trust Alice has been having not so friendship feelings toward Bette, in Hidden Feelings, Bette is kidnapped and as Willowr suggested I think it was Dana, and lets not forget Sox’s fantastic mystery-Breathe. jesus if I wanted this much brain activity I would have went back to school! Can’t wait for more, Hope Bette figures out who it is soon.
Wow Carmen. i would never had guessed her. great writing. post soon
Please please please please no more harm to Bette I think she has taken all that the one person can take
I CAUGHT UP!!I’M SO HAPPY THAT I DID, AHHHHH.I’VE SUSPECTED CARMEN FOR A LONG TIME, DON’T EVEN KNOW WHY. JUST FOR A LONG TIMEEEE!AHHH sorry for all caps, I’m just so insanely drawn into this!CONTINUE MY LOVE <3333
Damn this is getting more interesting and scarry, it’s true that is Carmen or Shane maybe not, oh Jenny I think we miessed that one on the list. Post soon please, thanks!
Well, that was quite a surprise. Never guessed Carmen. Very interesting!
Well, that was quite a surprise. Never guessed Carmen. Very interesting!
Well I didn’t expect that but I’ll like to see where you take this. Good Job.
Fucking MARVELOUS…THANKS POST SOON….
Hey RK,
Carmen certainly was a ‘trusted friend’ so I am sure with your talent that the reasoning behind this twist set of circumstances will slowly be revealed.
I can hardly breathe at the moment given the shock of this revelation.
Brilliant narrative as always; each character has their own voice in your story and that little (or big) bit different from the show.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
Well done as usual Reba! I enjoyed the clue you gave along the way… ““You still don’t have any idea of who this person could be,” Carmen asks of Bette”
I only post rarely..but I gotta say I feel like a genius lol. The second she said “you know nothing would’ve happened” I knew it was Carmen..and now i’m just upset because personally I love her!
K
Excellent chapter. Never guessed Carmen. I hope B and T will both come out of this ok. Love it.
Well done Reba, I yelled out 5 names before I shut up and just read the chapter. And Carmen wasn’t one of them.
I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more