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    Bette Forgets 58

    Story written on August 18, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    A few things you might need before reading: Paper bag, stiff drink, buddy for mouth to mouth. Hold on to your socks the stalker is revealed! Read Authors note first, please!

     

    This is another question that I keep asking myself, had there been any clues?  I think back on the last few months, I think long and hard.  No.  I can’t think of anything that would have given me or Bette a clue as to who this person was.

     

    I hear the creak of an old wooden door open somewhere above me and know that my captor is coming down.  This is confirmed when I hear the wooden stairs creak and footsteps descending down into my prison.  My prison.  This was the place where my beloved was robbed of so much of her life.

     

    “I know you’re awake Tina,” my captor speaks in a cheerful voice

     

    I am no longer kept drugged for I know whom this person is.  I kind of wished I were still drugged at this particular juncture.

     

    “Are you aware that you’re speaking out loud,” my captor asks in a whimsical voice

     

    I frowned at this.

     

    “It’s not safe to keep people drugged for long periods of time.  The idiots that kept our beloved weren’t aware of this fact.”

     

    Our beloved.

     

    “You’re in love with Bette?”

     

    “Where would you go and get a crazy idea like that?”

     

    “You just said beloved.  When someone says that word most of the time they are talking about someone that they love.”

     

    This statement is met with silence.

     

    “Yes and no,” my captor speaks in a low tenor

     

    “What does that mean,” I ask

     

    “I find myself lusting after her, drawn to her great beauty, her amazing strength of character and conviction.  Yet at the same time I want to wrap my hands around her delicate neck and squeeze the very life essence from that luscious body.”

     

    Not for the hundredth time, do I remind myself that my captor has jumped head first into insanity.

     

    “What drove you to this,” I ask

     

    “She did,” is the answer I’m met with, “She does not know the power that she wields.”

     

    “Power?”

     

    “Power,” my captor repeats, “She draws in those around her to bear witness to her exquisiteness.  Whether they know it or not those same individuals are forever indebted to her, forever loyal, foreverin love.”

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    4. Dude WTF!! were you fucking with me when you told me?? if so I will be one pissed off reader. It better not be carmen cause I called her out a long time ago.

    5. Everybody is officially obsessed with Bette.

      Carmen is the crazy-psycho stalker here because Shane is supposedly in love with Bette. Dana is probably the insane-obsessed-bitch behind all atrocities in that other story, Hidden Feelings… (well, the insane-obsessed-bitch has still not been revealed but is probably part of the group too… and also acting out of jealousy) and whoever planned it is also using James and Candance cause they are “in love” with Bette.
      Alice is acting like a hormone-driven-teenager in Renewed Trust, shouting out Bette’s name when… she shouldn’t!
      Even Helena had a son with Bette in some other story!!! I mean… even HELENA PEABODY!!!

      O.O

      You know what, Tina, you could come stay with me. I’ve always loved you more anyway =P

      *lol*

    6. WILLOWR – come to my house, please. that cracked the shit out of me. i think we could have lots to laugh and talk about. sorry, i digress.

      ok im not sure why its carmen, but im sure youll tell us. and being obsessed with bette i total understand. dont let tina get to hurt, shes just so sweet. and poor bette, wont know what to do with herself. post soon. my personal request, i love this story, but please can you find it in your heart to post some more, damn, i cant remember the name of the story, where bette has all those kids. i love that story. thanks again.

    9. reba, Finally had to comment after months of reading your most excellent fanfic! I paused after each page to digest more and more of the clues, when I got done reading your last chapter, I was convinced that it was Bette’s mom, only cuz the person talked about giving birth to children and Tina not knowing anything about it. After Tina tried to mentioned what I’m assuming to be Shane’s name to “the captor” that was when I decided it was Carmen, because I figured that Shane was the name not to be mentioned. And you already commented about the attraction between Bette and Shane. So…wonderful! Every single one of you fanfic writers have been making me use my brain to figure out mysteries. I totally LOL at Willowr because she is right in renewed trust Alice has been having not so friendship feelings toward Bette, in Hidden Feelings, Bette is kidnapped and as Willowr suggested I think it was Dana, and lets not forget Sox’s fantastic mystery-Breathe. jesus if I wanted this much brain activity I would have went back to school! Can’t wait for more, Hope Bette figures out who it is soon.

    12. I CAUGHT UP!!I’M SO HAPPY THAT I DID, AHHHHH.I’VE SUSPECTED CARMEN FOR A LONG TIME, DON’T EVEN KNOW WHY. JUST FOR A LONG TIMEEEE!AHHH sorry for all caps, I’m just so insanely drawn into this!CONTINUE MY LOVE <3333

    13. Damn this is getting more interesting and scarry, it’s true that is Carmen or Shane maybe not, oh Jenny I think we miessed that one on the list. Post soon please, thanks!

    18. Hey RK,
      Carmen certainly was a ‘trusted friend’ so I am sure with your talent that the reasoning behind this twist set of circumstances will slowly be revealed.
      I can hardly breathe at the moment given the shock of this revelation.
      Brilliant narrative as always; each character has their own voice in your story and that little (or big) bit different from the show.
      Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    19. Well done as usual Reba! I enjoyed the clue you gave along the way… ““You still don’t have any idea of who this person could be,” Carmen asks of Bette”

    20. I only post rarely..but I gotta say I feel like a genius lol. The second she said “you know nothing would’ve happened” I knew it was Carmen..and now i’m just upset because personally I love her!

    22. Well done Reba, I yelled out 5 names before I shut up and just read the chapter. And Carmen wasn’t one of them.
      I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more

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