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Bette Forgets 58
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Dana. I shake my head to this. Dana was too chicken to even come out of the closet. I can’t imagine what stalking and kidnapping someone would do to her.
Marina. That’s to weird to even think about.
Stacy. I didn’t meet her till after I became the new Bette Porter. She is a doctor. She took an oath to do no harm. Plus she’s eight months pregnant and ready to burst. I’m sure Tina could have put up a fight against her.
Ben. He two I met after I became a brand new woman. He also took an oath to serve and protect. We’ve been through too much together. He wouldn’t do this to me.
Shelly. Once again another person who took an oath. I have some saintly friends don’t it?
Tatyana. She just got out of witness protection for goodness sake.
Maureen. Blasphemy!
Laurence. Also blasphemy!
Teyla. Cop.
James. To chicken *****, in a good way of course.
Helena. Wouldn’t get her hands dirty. Plus knows I would totally kick her *****.
Kit. Sister for cripes sake.
No!
None of them have motive. I don’t understand this at all. Why would someone even be a stalker let alone stalk me, this is someone that I trust. They kidnapped the love of my life. When I figure out who it is they are so going to die, but not before I find Tina!
“Bette.”
I jump at Ben saying my name, “What?”
“I know it’s a stupid question but are you okay?”
“I won’t be okay until my love is back here with me where she belongs.”
Tina
My captor left me some time ago, leaving me to my darkness and my thoughts. Before they left they brought my feet out in front of me but not before tying them together. I can’t seem to grasp that I know who this person is, that Bette and I trust this person. It’s safe to say that we trusted this person with our lives; we’re the trusting type that way.
How did this happen?
This is the question that has been running in a continuous loop throughout my head ever since my captor revealed themselves for who they are. I try to understand, try to come to grips with what I know. Had there been any clues?
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Why??????
So who is it…Dana?? Sorry…did I miss something??
Oh…oops…I didn’t see the Carmen until after I posted. Okay, now I am on the same page!
Dude WTF!! were you fucking with me when you told me?? if so I will be one pissed off reader. It better not be carmen cause I called her out a long time ago.
Everybody is officially obsessed with Bette.
Carmen is the crazy-psycho stalker here because Shane is supposedly in love with Bette. Dana is probably the insane-obsessed-bitch behind all atrocities in that other story, Hidden Feelings… (well, the insane-obsessed-bitch has still not been revealed but is probably part of the group too… and also acting out of jealousy) and whoever planned it is also using James and Candance cause they are “in love” with Bette.
Alice is acting like a hormone-driven-teenager in Renewed Trust, shouting out Bette’s name when… she shouldn’t!
Even Helena had a son with Bette in some other story!!! I mean… even HELENA PEABODY!!!
O.O
You know what, Tina, you could come stay with me. I’ve always loved you more anyway =P
*lol*
WILLOWR – come to my house, please. that cracked the shit out of me. i think we could have lots to laugh and talk about. sorry, i digress.
ok im not sure why its carmen, but im sure youll tell us. and being obsessed with bette i total understand. dont let tina get to hurt, shes just so sweet. and poor bette, wont know what to do with herself. post soon. my personal request, i love this story, but please can you find it in your heart to post some more, damn, i cant remember the name of the story, where bette has all those kids. i love that story. thanks again.
whoa…i dont even know what to say at this point.i was seriously thinking it was the shrink.
fucking crazy please post again asap 5 stars! Damn’s Carmen!That’s screw poor, poor Shane!
reba, Finally had to comment after months of reading your most excellent fanfic! I paused after each page to digest more and more of the clues, when I got done reading your last chapter, I was convinced that it was Bette’s mom, only cuz the person talked about giving birth to children and Tina not knowing anything about it. After Tina tried to mentioned what I’m assuming to be Shane’s name to “the captor” that was when I decided it was Carmen, because I figured that Shane was the name not to be mentioned. And you already commented about the attraction between Bette and Shane. So…wonderful! Every single one of you fanfic writers have been making me use my brain to figure out mysteries. I totally LOL at Willowr because she is right in renewed trust Alice has been having not so friendship feelings toward Bette, in Hidden Feelings, Bette is kidnapped and as Willowr suggested I think it was Dana, and lets not forget Sox’s fantastic mystery-Breathe. jesus if I wanted this much brain activity I would have went back to school! Can’t wait for more, Hope Bette figures out who it is soon.
Wow Carmen. i would never had guessed her. great writing. post soon
Please please please please no more harm to Bette I think she has taken all that the one person can take
I CAUGHT UP!!I’M SO HAPPY THAT I DID, AHHHHH.I’VE SUSPECTED CARMEN FOR A LONG TIME, DON’T EVEN KNOW WHY. JUST FOR A LONG TIMEEEE!AHHH sorry for all caps, I’m just so insanely drawn into this!CONTINUE MY LOVE <3333
Damn this is getting more interesting and scarry, it’s true that is Carmen or Shane maybe not, oh Jenny I think we miessed that one on the list. Post soon please, thanks!
Well, that was quite a surprise. Never guessed Carmen. Very interesting!
Well, that was quite a surprise. Never guessed Carmen. Very interesting!
Well I didn’t expect that but I’ll like to see where you take this. Good Job.
Fucking MARVELOUS…THANKS POST SOON….
Hey RK,
Carmen certainly was a ‘trusted friend’ so I am sure with your talent that the reasoning behind this twist set of circumstances will slowly be revealed.
I can hardly breathe at the moment given the shock of this revelation.
Brilliant narrative as always; each character has their own voice in your story and that little (or big) bit different from the show.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
Well done as usual Reba! I enjoyed the clue you gave along the way… ““You still don’t have any idea of who this person could be,” Carmen asks of Bette”
I only post rarely..but I gotta say I feel like a genius lol. The second she said “you know nothing would’ve happened” I knew it was Carmen..and now i’m just upset because personally I love her!
K
Excellent chapter. Never guessed Carmen. I hope B and T will both come out of this ok. Love it.
Well done Reba, I yelled out 5 names before I shut up and just read the chapter. And Carmen wasn’t one of them.
I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more