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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 1
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MILK FRIDAY NIGHT AROUND 3AM
Shane, Alice and Dana left Milk just before closing. Shane had a pretty brunette on her arm as she told her friends good-bye. Alice turned to her friend. “I’m wasted I don’t know what Shane gave me but it has me a little brain numbed right now. Do you think you’re up to driving, because I don’t think I’m safe behind the wheel of a car?”
Dana was feeling a little buzzed at the same time. “No I’m a little tipsy myself. Why don’t we call a cab and go to my place. I can drive you back to your car in the morning. Al I’ve told you to stay away from anything Shane smoking or whatever, you’re going to fry your brain cells. And you don’t have a lot left to fry.”
Alice just hooked her arm into Dana’s. “Ha Ha.”
As Dana was pulling out her cell phone to call a cab. A voice came out of the alley beside them. “You two need a ride.” Dana pulled Alice closer to herself not liking the leer she was hearing from the voice. “No thank you.”
Just then, two large men stepped out from the side of the alley. “What? You two think you’re too good to go with us? Come on lets party.”
Alice was starting to come out of her drug and alcohol haze looked at the two in disgust and replied. “We’ll just stick to our own party. I’m sure it will be a lot more fun.”
Dana wanted to tell Alice that now was not the time to pick a verbal fight. She could tell by the way the men had been eying them that they were going to be trouble.
“So you two like to party with women I see. You know if you come with us, you’ll never want to party with women again. Come on ladies we’ll show you what real men are like.”
Alice still in her drugged haze and feeling indestructible didn’t catch on as Dana was trying to pull her toward the street and away from these men. “Well if you show me a real man, then we’ll think about it.”
Dana saw it coming but with Alice hanging onto her arm, she was too slow to do anything about it. The larger of the two had pushed Alice into the alley and against the wall.
“You know why there aren’t any good women out there anymore, because you dykes keep stealing them away.” After saying this he started to hit Alice repeatedly and till she doubled over in pain. Once she was on the ground, the large man continued to kick her repeatedly.
Dana started to pull the man off Alice but the other man grabbed her by her arms preventing her from going to her friends. She turned to the man holding her and begged him to tell his friend to stop before he killed her.
Dana could not believe how totally helpless she was to help her friend, started to sob uncontrollably still begging them to stop before they killed her.
About the time Dana was about to give up hope, thinking she was going to witness her friend being kill, Shane just happened to walk by. “What the *****?” She turned to her date for the night and told her to run into Milk and call the police.
Shane lunged for Alice attacker pulling him halfway off Alice. The man who was holding Dana yelled to his friends. “Let’s get out of here before the police show up. After giving Shane a shove and Alice one last kick. The two ran down the alley.
The man who had beaten Alice turned and yelled as he left. “***** dykes.”
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i think you should definetley continue. its a real eye opener and really well written.
debs – definitely continue – it is really good.
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
Hate crimes are real even for lesbians. Go to Google or what ever search engine you use and type in “Lesbian Hate Crimes” read a few of the articles, I think everyone will be a little suprised to see how much it still happens even today. And not just to men. It happen more in some countries then others, and even varies depending on what part of a country you live in. Deb
I love you so much Debs you had better continue!! I love your Danish stories no matter what they are about and this one sounds very good as always. Please dont stop i check like every hour for new posts. You are the BEST please do not stop!!!
So I’m new to this site and I just generally read the stories, but I was raped by some guy after he found out about me being gay it so happens and I think its great that you are writing about it even if it is a difficult subject to stomach. So yeah definately stay with the story.
definatley continue, i think you can probably tell from the amout of feedback you have and the general content that this is a fic that needs to be continued.
Deb’s you should definetly post..There is no reason to stop something that happens in our society..KEEP IT GOING..VERY WELL WRITTEN.THANKS
please continue.
Please keep going. I like how you have the perps just starting to excalate. I am interested in the direction you are going and how you are going to involve the girls in the case. It’s great!
intense. keep it going
having been a victim of a gay hate crime, quite disturbingly very similar to the story you are writing, i think it should be written about and think it would be great for you to continue.
Always love your stories and I continue. This one is very good, dificult to read but its reality, not? We live in a hard reality and you write this great. Continue and post soon.
I like this story and it is an eye opener for happen it is about please continue
U better continue, otherwise it would be a shame to let this great story hang in in the “air”. Just give us revenge, ok? i want to see those bastards behind curtains:)
Deb, I’m so glad you finally posted this fic. You know how much I love it and you must continue this.
Hate crimes happen everyday, It can start in school when some one even thinks you are gay, Girl beating up girls and Boys doing the same to gay boy. In the adult world it out there. Please continue writing every one that reads F/F should know about this crime.. thanks