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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 1
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The next morning before Alice’s release, two police officers walked into her room. “Good morning Miss Pieszecki, we’re here to talk to you, we’re hoping you can tell us about your assailant. Do you remember anything about the two men who attacked you?
Alice thought about it for several moments before replying. “Not really, I’m still having a hard time remember most of the night. I guess he knocked me out pretty quickly last night. Do the police have any leads?
The officers looked defeated as they told Alice what they knew, “No, it doesn’t look promising about catching these guys, unless someone come forward who can identify them. Nobody seem to be able to give us a clear description. However, I don’t think you are the first ***** bashing they have perpetrated. We have several reports of two men with shave heads harassing females at several of the local ***** bars. What scares us is they are getting more violent. We’ve had a few women sexually molested, not raped, but molested with the two telling them that lesbians were taking all the good women. They seem to be becoming more violent with each harassment. I’m sure in time they will slip up and we will catch them we’re just afraid what might happen to the next women.”
Alice and Dana both wished they could help the officers more then they had, but they really didn’t remember much about the two, it happened so fast and unexpectedly, that all their focus on was Alice not being beaten to death.
The officers left the room once again hating they had no more leads on these two then they had, but glad this victim was OK, but still having a deep fear about what would happen to the next woman.
I was not too much longer before the Doctor walked in to talk to Alice and Dana. He gave Alice a prescription for pain, and asked if she though she might need something for anxiety. Even though both women didn’t feel the need for the last medication, they went ahead and took the prescription just in case.
After receiving Alice’s final discharge papers, the two women prepared to go to Dana’s for the next few days or until Alice was up to going to her own home.
TBC
OK guys, this is going to be a recovery fic. Plus a wakeup call for all the friends about hate crimes. I’m not going to post anymore until I get feedback as to if I should go on. Or would you guys like me to remove this story and write on a happier subject. Let me know, and if you don’t want your comments on the bottom of the page feel free to PM me on this site. Negative feedback is welcomed also. Deb
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i think you should definetley continue. its a real eye opener and really well written.
debs – definitely continue – it is really good.
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
Hate crimes are real even for lesbians. Go to Google or what ever search engine you use and type in “Lesbian Hate Crimes” read a few of the articles, I think everyone will be a little suprised to see how much it still happens even today. And not just to men. It happen more in some countries then others, and even varies depending on what part of a country you live in. Deb
I love you so much Debs you had better continue!! I love your Danish stories no matter what they are about and this one sounds very good as always. Please dont stop i check like every hour for new posts. You are the BEST please do not stop!!!
So I’m new to this site and I just generally read the stories, but I was raped by some guy after he found out about me being gay it so happens and I think its great that you are writing about it even if it is a difficult subject to stomach. So yeah definately stay with the story.
definatley continue, i think you can probably tell from the amout of feedback you have and the general content that this is a fic that needs to be continued.
Deb’s you should definetly post..There is no reason to stop something that happens in our society..KEEP IT GOING..VERY WELL WRITTEN.THANKS
please continue.
Please keep going. I like how you have the perps just starting to excalate. I am interested in the direction you are going and how you are going to involve the girls in the case. It’s great!
intense. keep it going
having been a victim of a gay hate crime, quite disturbingly very similar to the story you are writing, i think it should be written about and think it would be great for you to continue.
Always love your stories and I continue. This one is very good, dificult to read but its reality, not? We live in a hard reality and you write this great. Continue and post soon.
I like this story and it is an eye opener for happen it is about please continue
U better continue, otherwise it would be a shame to let this great story hang in in the “air”. Just give us revenge, ok? i want to see those bastards behind curtains:)
Deb, I’m so glad you finally posted this fic. You know how much I love it and you must continue this.
Hate crimes happen everyday, It can start in school when some one even thinks you are gay, Girl beating up girls and Boys doing the same to gay boy. In the adult world it out there. Please continue writing every one that reads F/F should know about this crime.. thanks