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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 1
The intensity of the feelings she was going through at that moment were both revealing and shocking. She realized at that moment that Alice was the most important person in her life, which at first shock her, but then it hit her, it had probably been that way for a while.
Dana was awakened by the sound of Alice thrashing around in her sleep. Dana could tell that even though Alice was in deep sleep, she was also having a nightmare, and not doubt the nightmare was about what happen last night. It almost looked like Alice was fighting in her nightmare, or trying to defend herself against pain.
Dana walked over the Alice and started to reassure her that she was OK, she continually brushed her hair away from her face, telling her to please wake up, and she was alright. After several minutes of this Alice finely woke up.
Dana was never as happy as she was at that moment to see Alice’s brown eyes. Even though her eyelids were swollen, and discolored from the beating, she never thought Alice’s eyes were as beautiful as they were at that moment.
Dana pushed Alice’s hair behind her ear, then gently cupped her cheek in her hand feeling the warmth and smoothness of Alice’s battered face. “Al, I was so scared, please don’t ever do this again.” As Dana was saying this she could feel the tears falling from her face. She wanted so bad to take Alice in her arms and keep her safe, so nothing would ever happen to her again.
Alice looked around realizing for the first time she was in a hospital room. She was starting to remember a little about the beating, and at one point waking up in the ER and asking for Dana. However, other then a few scattered memories of the night she was still in a bit of a haze, between the meds and partying at the club the night before.
When she looked at Dana she could tell the night had taken a toll on her though. “I’m sorry” was all at the time she thought to say, because the night was still a big blur in her memory, and judging by Dana’s face and emotions, she wasn’t sure if she really wanted to remember.
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(13 votes, average: 4.31 out of 5)
i think you should definetley continue. its a real eye opener and really well written.
debs – definitely continue – it is really good.
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
Hate crimes are real even for lesbians. Go to Google or what ever search engine you use and type in “Lesbian Hate Crimes” read a few of the articles, I think everyone will be a little suprised to see how much it still happens even today. And not just to men. It happen more in some countries then others, and even varies depending on what part of a country you live in. Deb
I love you so much Debs you had better continue!! I love your Danish stories no matter what they are about and this one sounds very good as always. Please dont stop i check like every hour for new posts. You are the BEST please do not stop!!!
So I’m new to this site and I just generally read the stories, but I was raped by some guy after he found out about me being gay it so happens and I think its great that you are writing about it even if it is a difficult subject to stomach. So yeah definately stay with the story.
definatley continue, i think you can probably tell from the amout of feedback you have and the general content that this is a fic that needs to be continued.
Deb’s you should definetly post..There is no reason to stop something that happens in our society..KEEP IT GOING..VERY WELL WRITTEN.THANKS
please continue.
Please keep going. I like how you have the perps just starting to excalate. I am interested in the direction you are going and how you are going to involve the girls in the case. It’s great!
intense. keep it going
having been a victim of a gay hate crime, quite disturbingly very similar to the story you are writing, i think it should be written about and think it would be great for you to continue.
Always love your stories and I continue. This one is very good, dificult to read but its reality, not? We live in a hard reality and you write this great. Continue and post soon.
I like this story and it is an eye opener for happen it is about please continue
U better continue, otherwise it would be a shame to let this great story hang in in the “air”. Just give us revenge, ok? i want to see those bastards behind curtains:)
Deb, I’m so glad you finally posted this fic. You know how much I love it and you must continue this.
Hate crimes happen everyday, It can start in school when some one even thinks you are gay, Girl beating up girls and Boys doing the same to gay boy. In the adult world it out there. Please continue writing every one that reads F/F should know about this crime.. thanks