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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 1
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LA COUNTY HOSPTIAL WEST ER
Dana paced the ER waiting room for what had to be the one hundredth time. She kept thinking ‘what is taking the damn Doctor so long.’ She looked up to see Bette and Tina walking in and right behind them was what Alice’s liked to call the tridykes, Shane, Carmen and Jenny. Tina went up to hug Dana as she did she noticed all the blood on Dana clothes. “Dana would you like me to ask the nurse if she can find some scrubs for you to change into?”
Dana looked down to see her outfit was covered with Alice’s blood. “No I don’t want to leave in case the Doctor comes out to tell us about Alice.”
No sooner then Dana spoke those words a young ER Doctor walked into the waiting area. “Is Alice Pieszecki’s family here?” All six of the women walked over to the Doctor wanting to hear what he had to say.
The Doctor looked at Dana seeing all the blood on her clothes. “Are you Dana Fairbanks?” Dana nodded her head yes. “She has been asking about you. Miss Pieszecki is in the holding area. She has a broken nose, several broken ribs. Her lung was bruised by one of her ribs. In addition, she has a lot of deep bruising all over her body. However, considering the beating she received she is in pretty good shape. We would like to keep her overnight because of the lung injury, but as long as someone stays with her she can probably go home tomorrow. She will be stiff and in a lot of pain for the next few days because of her ribs and bruised lung, so she will need someone to stay with her.”
Before anyone else even had the chance to volunteer Dana looked at the Doctor and said. “I’ll stay with her. and I’ll take care of her.”
After the Doctor left the other women let Dana know that she could count on them if she needed any help with anything just let them know, because they knew she was taking on a huge responsibility. However, before they could tell her how she might need assistants with the care of Alice, she let them know she appreciated their help, and would let them know of she needed anything, but she would take care of Alice.
ALICE’S ROOM LATER THAT NIGHT
Dana had fallen asleep in the chair beside Alice bed, she knew Alice had been given painkiller and would probably sleep through the night, but still she just couldn’t bring herself to leave. She just kept thinking about how grateful she was that Alice’s injuries were not as bad as she thought were at first. In addition, she realized while she was holding Alice’s head in her lap thinking she was going to die, that she didn’t know what she would do without her.
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i think you should definetley continue. its a real eye opener and really well written.
debs – definitely continue – it is really good.
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
Hate crimes are real even for lesbians. Go to Google or what ever search engine you use and type in “Lesbian Hate Crimes” read a few of the articles, I think everyone will be a little suprised to see how much it still happens even today. And not just to men. It happen more in some countries then others, and even varies depending on what part of a country you live in. Deb
I love you so much Debs you had better continue!! I love your Danish stories no matter what they are about and this one sounds very good as always. Please dont stop i check like every hour for new posts. You are the BEST please do not stop!!!
So I’m new to this site and I just generally read the stories, but I was raped by some guy after he found out about me being gay it so happens and I think its great that you are writing about it even if it is a difficult subject to stomach. So yeah definately stay with the story.
definatley continue, i think you can probably tell from the amout of feedback you have and the general content that this is a fic that needs to be continued.
Deb’s you should definetly post..There is no reason to stop something that happens in our society..KEEP IT GOING..VERY WELL WRITTEN.THANKS
please continue.
Please keep going. I like how you have the perps just starting to excalate. I am interested in the direction you are going and how you are going to involve the girls in the case. It’s great!
intense. keep it going
having been a victim of a gay hate crime, quite disturbingly very similar to the story you are writing, i think it should be written about and think it would be great for you to continue.
Always love your stories and I continue. This one is very good, dificult to read but its reality, not? We live in a hard reality and you write this great. Continue and post soon.
I like this story and it is an eye opener for happen it is about please continue
U better continue, otherwise it would be a shame to let this great story hang in in the “air”. Just give us revenge, ok? i want to see those bastards behind curtains:)
Deb, I’m so glad you finally posted this fic. You know how much I love it and you must continue this.
Hate crimes happen everyday, It can start in school when some one even thinks you are gay, Girl beating up girls and Boys doing the same to gay boy. In the adult world it out there. Please continue writing every one that reads F/F should know about this crime.. thanks