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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 1
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Dana ran to her friend and cradled her head in her lap. “Shane please call an ambulance! Alice hang in there Babe, help is on its way.”
She looked down and couldn’t believe Alice’s face. She had blood everywhere. Dana was sure Alice’s nose was broken, and there was no telling what else.
A short time later Dana could hear the ambulance in the background as she sat there holding her friend. The police had arrived a few minutes earlier and were talking to her as they knelt down beside her. “Your friend will be OK Miss. I hear the ambulance coming. Miss can you tell be anything about her attackers?”
Dana just looked at them still in a state of shock. “I think I can remember them if I see them again. Can I talk to you later? I just want my friend to be OK.”
The officer could see Dana was in pain also, but knew he needed to get as much information as he could or they may never get these guys. “I’m sorry but you need to tell us what you remember if we want to get these guys.”
Dana could feel the tears falling from her eyes as she tried to tell the officer what she remembered. “They were Caucasian over six feet. Their heads were shaved so I don’t know what color their hair was. That all I can remember please let me help Alice.”
The officer stepped back knowing chances were they would never solve this case. It was probably another ***** bashing. It seemed that there had been an increase of these hate crimes lately. Moreover, because it involved the ***** community nobody seemed to care. It was a shame because as far as he was concerned the homosexual community really did mind their own business and usually unless somebody bothered them, they really didn’t cause a lot of trouble.
The EMT workers walked up just as the officer had backed away. They started an IV on Alice as they were calling in her injuries to the hospitals. One of the EMT looked to Dana and asked, “Do you know if she has any allergies.” Dana shook her head no. “Has she been drinking or using any drugs.” Dana looked up at the police officer not knowing if they would use this against Alice. “She has been drinking tonight, and I know she did some drugs tonight, but I don’t know what kind.”
Shane knowing that taking care of Alice was more important then the cops searching her went ahead and told them what all Alice had done. “She’s had a little pot and a line of coke.”
The police officer walked off acting like he hadn’t heard the conversation. He figured these ladies had gone through enough and he wasn’t going to add to this. He nodded to Shane letting her know he knew but was going to let it slip this time.
As they were loading Alice into the back of the ambulance Dana walked up. “May I go with her please?” The EMT asked, “Are you family?” Dana pleaded with them. “Not by blood, but she is my family.” The EMT driver seeing the pain in Dana’s face replied “Sure you can ride in the front.” He then turned to Shane and the small group of people that had gathered. “We’re taking her to LA County Hospital West; you may want to call her family.”
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i think you should definetley continue. its a real eye opener and really well written.
debs – definitely continue – it is really good.
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
definitely continue with the story. you dont really hear about hate crimes happening to women
Hate crimes are real even for lesbians. Go to Google or what ever search engine you use and type in “Lesbian Hate Crimes” read a few of the articles, I think everyone will be a little suprised to see how much it still happens even today. And not just to men. It happen more in some countries then others, and even varies depending on what part of a country you live in. Deb
I love you so much Debs you had better continue!! I love your Danish stories no matter what they are about and this one sounds very good as always. Please dont stop i check like every hour for new posts. You are the BEST please do not stop!!!
So I’m new to this site and I just generally read the stories, but I was raped by some guy after he found out about me being gay it so happens and I think its great that you are writing about it even if it is a difficult subject to stomach. So yeah definately stay with the story.
definatley continue, i think you can probably tell from the amout of feedback you have and the general content that this is a fic that needs to be continued.
Deb’s you should definetly post..There is no reason to stop something that happens in our society..KEEP IT GOING..VERY WELL WRITTEN.THANKS
please continue.
Please keep going. I like how you have the perps just starting to excalate. I am interested in the direction you are going and how you are going to involve the girls in the case. It’s great!
intense. keep it going
having been a victim of a gay hate crime, quite disturbingly very similar to the story you are writing, i think it should be written about and think it would be great for you to continue.
Always love your stories and I continue. This one is very good, dificult to read but its reality, not? We live in a hard reality and you write this great. Continue and post soon.
I like this story and it is an eye opener for happen it is about please continue
U better continue, otherwise it would be a shame to let this great story hang in in the “air”. Just give us revenge, ok? i want to see those bastards behind curtains:)
Deb, I’m so glad you finally posted this fic. You know how much I love it and you must continue this.
Hate crimes happen everyday, It can start in school when some one even thinks you are gay, Girl beating up girls and Boys doing the same to gay boy. In the adult world it out there. Please continue writing every one that reads F/F should know about this crime.. thanks