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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Alice
and Dana had been kissing in the bathroom for about ten minutes when
there was a knock on the door and Shane poked her head inside. Wearing
a mischievous grin on her features, she told them that she knew The
Planet bathroom was their special place but she really couldn’t keep
guarding the door for them because there was a developing line of
people who actually needed to pee. The couple formed simultaneous
blushes and leaned into each other, hiding their faces briefly before
telling Shane they would be out soon.
“Hey Al?” Dana said softly, her voice muffled as she rested into the
blonde once again, hiding in the crook of her neck and happily
breathing in her scent.
“Yeah?” asked Alice, frowning worriedly and studying the athlete’s
features. Wondering if the other woman was already having regrets. Sad
as it might be, she wouldn’t exactly blame Dana if she was. Some dark
and hidden part of her was already having doubts.
“The Planet bathroom is our special place, isn’t it?” asked Dana, a
laugh in her voice, lifting her head to reveal twinkling eyes. “We’re
usually in here when important things happen to us.”
“I don’t know if that makes it our special place,” said Alice dryly.
“That just makes it a place we end up in a lot together. Which is
hardly surprising since we’re always in The Planet.”
Chuckling quietly, Dana stroked Alice’s face with one hand and leaned
in close to rub their noses together. Gazing into brown eyes, Dana
smiled and murmured, “Does that mean you wouldn’t approve of my idea
about having our anniversary parties in here?”
Swallowing the lump in her throat, Alice wondered if Dana even realized
what she had just said and what it would really mean to her. Thinking
that the tennis player most likely didn’t know and couldn’t grasp what
a promise like that would do to her if broken, Alice decided to dismiss
it as she said with weak humor, “It’s fine by me if you can fit in the
caterers and open bar.”
Silence and then Dana was holding her face, turning Alice’s head until
their gazes met. Wearing a soft but sad and understanding smile, she
lightly ran her fingertips across Alice’s cheek, caressing pale skin.
“Don’t be scared,” she said in a quiet plea. “I know what I want and
where I want to be and it’s with you, Alice. It’s always with you from
now on.”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!