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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Hushed whispers of love were all that remained. Then came the quiet
whoosh of a blanket pushed aside and the thump of clothes hastily
removed. Mouths that moaned and whimpered as they met hot and hungry
and seeking. Hands that were frantic but gentle and tender and echoing
with adoration in the way they traced of every harsh line. Caressing
the ribs that painfully jutted out and kissing the bruised skin now
laid bare as Alice lowered Dana carefully on the bed, climbing over her
slow and sleek like a cat after its prey.
Alice kissed her long and hard and detailed. Wanting to have everything
there was to taste of Dana before she slid down to take the nipple of
her right breast into her mouth. Sucking on it softly and nuzzling the
skin while her fingers played out over the tennis player’s body,
learning the changes and taking them in. Showing Dana with every stroke
that she saw the differences and she not only accepted them but she
loved them because they were a part of the athlete.
It was like being worshipped, Dana realized, trembling and shaking and
trying to hold off on her third orgasm as Alice sucked hard then soft
on her clit. There wasn’t a part of her body that the blonde hadn’t
kissed, caressed, or simply loved and it was like being worshipped
because Dana had never felt this perfect before. How could there be
anything wrong with her inside or out when Alice could treat her this
way? Touch her this way? Tender but passionate and so fucking eager, as
if she could never get enough of the athlete. As if she was trying to
use this time to somehow get her fill only to realize that it just
wasn’t possible. So she was now in a frenzy, trying desperately to get
as much as she was able.
Seconds that turned into minutes that turned into hours. That was how
long they made love. The unwelcome end arriving at the onset of
exhaustion, collapsing into each other in a tangle of limbs and shallow
breathing. Their bodies aching and their minds dazed, they were lost in
a kaleidoscope of feeling, both physical and emotional. Unable to truly
comprehend everything that had just happened between them but knowing
one thing absolutely.
The love they had for each other could never disappear. No matter what
happened, it would always go on because love doesn’t need a body to
exist. It just needs a soul.
To be continued…
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!