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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Jenny started to walk out but paused when the journalist gripped her
hand, causing to turn and tilt her head in question. “Jenny,” began
Alice in entirely naughty tones. “How would you like to help us make a
break for it?”
“Fleeing from the prying eyes?” asked Jenny, forming a sweet but
knowing smile. “You know you can’t avoid the questions forever.
Eventually, they will demand answers.”
“And eventually we’ll give them,” drawled Alice playfully as she rocked
towards Jenny. She took Dana along for the ride as the athlete was
refusing to surrender her current hold on Alice. Almost as if Dana was
afraid any physical distance that occurred would restore the emotional
distance they had gone through in the past months. “But just not right
now. We need some private time first.”
“I understand completely,” said Jenny. She tilted her head again and
tapped her chin thoughtfully as her eyes grew lidded in contemplation.
Then she released a gleeful squeal and bounced on her feet. Waving her
hands at the couple, Jenny practically skipped out the door as she
said, “I know what to do!”
The couple was alone for just a few moments when there was a hesitant
knock and Moira opened the door slowly before walking inside. “Hey
guys,” she said, smiling nervously and shoving her hands deep into the
pockets of her jeans. She still didn’t feel entirely comfortable with
Jenny’s friends and arriving late to this fairly small and private
party and now being alone in a bathroom with two of them wasn’t helping
matters. “Jenny told me to keep watch while prepares an escape route.”
“Escape route?” echoed Dana skeptically.
“Jenny is making her very own lesbian underground railroad just for us
to use?” asked Alice, giving a playful chuckle. No matter how strange
some might find Jenny she couldn’t help but hold affection and
admiration for the skinny writer because of her emotional honesty. “You
must be proud.”
“Jenny is something,” said Moira quietly though her eyes gained a glow
as she spoke about the writer. Quickly becoming shy, Moira ducked her
head and shifted her weight foot to foot. A moment passed then she
peeked up, greeted by matching smiles from Alice and Dana. “She’s right
though,” Moira began tentatively. “You’re beautiful together.”
Alice and Dana formed another joint smile and were about to reply when
Jenny merrily bounced into the room. “I’ve got your escape route ready
to go,” she declared.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!