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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“Dana,” Alice said her name in strangled tones, looking very much like
she was trying desperately to maintain her composure but was having a
difficult time doing so.
“Stop hiding from me,” said Dana in a bare whisper, holding Alice
gently and leaning in to capture her lips for a kiss meant to start the
healing process for all the emotional wounds she knew she had caused in
the way she left Alice. “Let me show you how much I love you. And
please let me prove that I won’t hurt you again, that I won’t leave
you.”
Alice cried into their kiss that led to another kiss and another and
she wasn’t crying because she didn’t believe Dana. She knew when the
athlete lied, it was painfully easy to tell, and she knew Dana wasn’t
lying when she said she loved her and wouldn’t hurt her again. Leaving
is what the caused tears to fall because even if Dana didn’t want
to leave there was this fucking disease to deal with. The thought of
once again having Dana and her love only to lose it to something
neither of them could stop was too painfully cruel for Alice’s liking.
She didn’t want to think about that though. Which is why she rose up
and into Dana’s kiss, opening her mouth to suck on the athlete’s
tongue, sending them propelling back into the wall as they continued to
kiss frantic and deep. Ignoring the sound of the door opening and the
scurried sound of someone rushing in and giving them an absent apology.
The sound of the toilet flushing and the person washing their hands
caused the couple to reluctantly part because as much as they were
enjoying their kisses neither quite liked the idea of having an
audience. Peering around Alice’s shoulder, Dana blushed and smiled on
seeing Jenny, who looked up from washing her hands to give them a warm
smile.
“Congratulations,” said Jenny, beaming at the couple as she dried her
hands with one of the paper towels resting on the counter. Tossing it
into the trash as she walked forward, she lightly touched the small of
Alice’s back and gave first the blonde and then Dana a quick kiss on
their cheeks. “You’re beautiful.”
“Thanks,” said Alice and Dana together, laughing when they spoke at the
same time and suddenly understanding why Bette and Tina had been sort
of disturbed by this before.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!