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More Than a Feeling
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Tina stood in front of her mirror, a casual dress in one hand, and a pair of slacks in the other. What to wear, what to wearshe mumbled, alternating between the dress and the pants. After much deliberation, Tina let out a frustrated groan and threw both down on the unusually large pile of clothes on her bed. Shit. She hissed. I have three hours before dinner at Bettes and I have no clue what to wear!!
Succumbing to the defeat of a pathetic wardrobe, Tina sat next to her mountain of completely unacceptable clothing and pulled out her cell phone. Frowning, she dialed Bette, who answered in a few rings. Hey Tee, whats up?
I dont know what to wear! My wardrobe sucks. Tina pouted, rolling her eyes as she bounced slightly on the bed, causing a cloth avalanche. Articles slid from her bed to the floor, creating an even bigger mess.
Bette laughed out loud. Wear whatever you want Tee.
Oh, thats a perfect idea! Tina exclaimed sarcastically. Hmmwear whatever I wantwhy didnt I think of that?
You know, sarcasm doesnt become you.
But it sustains me. Tina chuckled. Seriously though, how do you think I should dress?
Well, if it helps, Dads getting the grill ready. Were barbequing. Oh, and he likes to put sauce on everything.
So, casual, but not too casualand apparently no white. Got it. Tina nodded, looking at her heap.
So, crisis averted?
Possibly. Tina said, squinting as she searched, Cloth Mountain. Ill call you if I need help again.
Because I give such good advice. Bette scoffed. Ill be there in a while to pick you up. If youre still having trouble, I could stop by early and help you out.
No, thats all right but you can stop by early so we have some time together before I meet your dad.
Bette smiled. Sounds like a plan.
Yep.
Okay, so Ill see you in a bit.
Yes Mame. Tina said, beginning to sift through the pile. Bye babe. Oh shit. Maybe she didnt hear me.
Babe? Bette asked, her smile growing wider and wider.
She heard me. Im sorry, it just slipped out.
Dont be sorry. I like it.
Yeah? Tina bit the nail on her index finger, smiling slightly. Okay thenbabe. Ill see you soon.
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!