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More Than a Feeling
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Tina looked out toward the city. Its beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with me. She turned and gave Bette a quick peck on the lips.
Bette returned the kiss with a more passionate one of her own, and then they just sat there, watching the town change colors as the sun set. Tina rested her head on Bettes shoulder, sighing contentedly. Is your Dad going to like me?
Tina sounded so innocent at that moment; Bette wanted to hug her tightly. She firmed her grip around Tinas arm, squeezing her a little. My father is going to love you.
Any pointers?
Uh Bette frowned. I-I guess just be prepared to answer a lot of questions about school. Thats basically it.
I hate talking about school.
Well, thats all my father talks aboutso learn to love it. Bette touched foreheads with Tina.
Im learning to love somethingsomeone. Tina grabbed Bettes other hand and squeezed it, kissing her again.
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As she exited the car, Tina shook her head. It was a large brown Victorian home. It was big but definitely not homey. There was a coldness about it that made Tina even more nervous. Maybe its just the outside. Your house isreally big.
Yeah. I hate it too.
Tina shook her head. Oh, no, I dont hate it. I–
Its okay Tee. Its a little intimidatingbut its home.
Yeah. Tina looked up, squinting at the late-day California sun. The house was intimidating, but Bette lived there, so she swallowed her anxiety and made her way up the porch steps.
Inside ran like a museum. Art covered the walls and sculptures were placed in nearly every corner. How does she move around this place without tripping? Tina asked herself as she stumbled over an African statue.
So, what do you think? Bette asked, moving around the room like an Olympic skater on ice, missing every little obstacle with ease.
Well, now I see where your love for Art comes from. Tina looked around at all of the various works, some vaguely familiar, others completely unknown to her. All looked very interesting though. She gazed around, trying to take in anything that would remind her of Bette. Surprisingly, nothing did.
Bette, is that you? A deep, raspy voice called from the kitchen.
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!