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More Than a Feeling
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All right. Bye. Bette hung up.
Tina flipped her phone down and put her hands on her hips, twisting her mouth around as she looked at her clothes. She sighed, slapping her hands against her thighs. Damn.
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A little while later, Bette pulled up to Tinas house and cut the engine, getting out and quickly stepping to the front door. She rang the bell, expecting Jagger to greet her first. Instead, the door opened immediately, revealing Tina.
She was wearing a tight black blouse and very tight low-rise khaki flares that hugged all the right curves. It nearly took Bettes breath away. H-hi. She managed to get out, swallowing. It seemed like her throat was closing on her.
Hi. Tina stepped forward and hugged Bette.
Immediately, her airways were cleared and filled with an aromatic fragrance. It swirled around her head, leaving her momentarily dizzy. When Tina pulled back, Bette frowned with disappointment. Tina closed her door, made sure it was locked, and stepped down in front of Bette. Do you like the outfit? Is it too casual?
Its perfecty-you look beautiful.
Thank you. Tinas eyes shined for a second. Lets go.
Okay.
Bette drove up to the highest point in Corona Bay, a hill overgrown with weeds and fenced off by the local junkyard operator. Toward the edge, if one just peeked over, all of Corona Bay lay lit, busy with nightlife. She knew no one else would be there (because all the horny teens went to Lovers Edge, the second highest point in Corona Bay, a few miles from the local campsites), and needed a change of scenery. The park was fun, but Bette wanted Tina to know that she had her own spot, as unseemly as it was.
Bette got out and walked over to the passenger side, opening Tinas door. Tina stepped out and looked around. How romantic. She stated flatly, but playfully.
Bette smiled as she eased herself up on to the hood of her car and motioned for Tina to do the same. Tina did, cuddling close to Bettes body as Bette wrapped an arm over her shoulders. I used to come here all the time to try to paint the townno matter how many times I did it, it never looked right.
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!