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More Than a Feeling
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Tina cut her off. Its fine. Ill wash and you dry, okay?
Bette smiled, flinging the dishtowel over her shoulder. Okay. As they cleaned, Bette imagined living alone with Tina, just the two of them together, years from now, in a home all their own. It would be right after dinner, Tina would wash and Bette would dry. And it would be like that every night. Bette sighed as she thought about it, but was pulled out of her daydream by a wet dish being shaken in her face.
Yoo-hoo, Bette! Hello, youre holding up the line here! Tina teased.
Sorrywait, what line?
The line of wet dishes, cups and utensils in need of some drying.
Tee, there were three of us.
What were you thinking about anyway?
I was just thinking Bette answered. Tina didnt pry. Soyou survived dinner with my father. What do you think?
I like your father. He kinda reminds me of my dad.
Bette could hear the bitter sweetness of that statement. She didnt say anything, only nodded. Tina frowned for a minute and then looked to Bette. Its gonna suck when he stops liking me.
Bette grimaced. He wont stop liking you. Hell just ignore you.
How about that boyfriend question? That surprised me, did it surprise you?
I almost spit water all over the table. Bette said, shaking her head. Hes never asked that before. It was weirdbut I know what he was trying to pull.
Tina laughed. Yeah that was pretty funny. But I kinda dug the hole deeper there, telling him I did have one.
It doesnt matter. Alice brought some of her boyfriends to my house before my father found out. Actually, she brought two over since he found out. Hes very confused by her. Bette shook her head. He keeps mumbling about her picking a genderor something.
Tina let out a small snicker. Thats nice. She handed Bette the last wet utensil and Bette dried it, placing it in a drawer by the stove.
Well, thats it. Thanks for helping.
No problem. Tina winked at Bette.
So, what do you want to do now?
Tinas eyes twinkled. Does your door have a lock on it?
Yes. Bette raised her eyebrow mischievously.
Well, what are we waiting for then?
Dad! Tina and I are going up to my room tostudy! Bette shouted as she grabbed Tinas hand and began to pull her toward the stairs.
Okay girls! Melvin answered from the backyard.
Both Tina and Bette giggled as they headed for Bettes bedroom.
To Be Continued
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!