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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along


    Previously

    I kissed her again in an attempt to reassure her that she had not scared me away. We both moaned. “Let’s make you presentable,” I smiled and said. I reached over and hooked the front clasp of her bra, and pressed my lips against her chest. Then I slowly buttoned her top, and took her hand. “Let’s go inside as you suggested,” I urged, turning to lead her towards the steps to her deck, gently, but needlessly coaxing her with me. “We have another bottle of wine to taste,” I reminded her.

    “You’re staying,” Helena said. I wasn’t sure if it was a statement of surprise or a question.

    I turned my head and leaned over to kiss her as we walked. I loved that the sand beneath our feet slowed our stride.

    When our lips parted, I grinned and replied, “Yes, I’m staying. Unless you want me to leave.”

    In answer, she swatted me playfully on the ass, as we made our way up the deck stairs.

    “Don’t even fucking think about it,” she dared, wrapping her arms around me from behind.


    Chapter 9


    When we reached the deck at the top of the stairs, I took Bette’s hand as we walked past the pool. She didn’t appear to have any opposition to my doing so. In fact, she turned to me and smiled before speaking softly, “You realize, of course, that every time you touch me, even simply holding my hand, it throws me into a fever pitch.”

    “And is that a good thing?” I asked, turning to look at her.

    “Indeed, I think it may be a very good thing,” Bette replied, stopping and leaning in for a fiery kiss.

    I pulled back and said, “I could push you into the pool to cool you off, you know?”

    “Oh, could you now?” Bette jeered playfully.

    “I believe I could,” I grinned.

    “And why would you want to do that?” Bette inquired, thoroughly enjoying herself.

    I turned to face her squarely. We stood about two feet from the pool with her back to the water. “Because then,” I said, pushing my hands against her shoulders and knocking her off balance, “I could strip you out of your wet clothes and wrap you in a bathrobe.”

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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