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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    She pulled her head back up slowly.

    “Let me remove your gown,” she whispered.

    Bette nuzzled her face into the middle of my chest, stroking the outside of each breast tenderly. She rolled the robe back off my shoulders, and it too found its resting place on the floor. We stood together in our exotic nakedness, and I knew I’d found heaven.

    Bette seated herself on the edge of the bed, and tugged my hand.

    “Let’s make love,” she whispered.

    I sat on Bette’s lap, straddling her, and we kissed passionately, our torsos undulating against each other, our nipples caressing each other’s. We struggled to find control over the other’s neck. Our tongues licked in a frenzy.

    Bette lay back against the surface of the bed, and pulled me with her. She rolled on top of me and kissed my lips. She licked down my neck to my breasts, and took an erect nipple into her mouth and sucked gingerly. With her left thumb she teased and pinched my right nipple. Then she switched sides to perform the same sensual task. I caressed her bare ass and stroked her crack with my palm and fingers. She rolled with my touch. I ran my hand down the length of her crack and plied my fingers between her folds. Wet and dripping, she moaned heavily.

    “Oh, God, Helena, it’s not going to take much to get me to come,” she said.

    I maneuvered my way on top of her, quickly moving my hand between Bette’s legs. I kissed her and licked her neck. I stroked her gently with my hand, back and forth, making sure that each motion grazed her clitoris. She jerked and bucked and writhed beneath me.

    “Fuck!” Bette screamed.

    I moved my tongue down her front, stopping to suck each nipple, before proceeding lower. She was becoming wetter and wetter. I inserted one finger, then two, finding a rhythm. Her head rolled back and forth, and up and down.

    “Oh, God, Helena, I want your tongue,” Bette growled.

    “Your wish is my command,” I whispered.


    I removed my fingers and found my position, my head between her legs. I pulled back her flesh and bathed her with my tongue, then flicked the tip of it against her clit and nibbled tenderly. Her smell was intoxicating. And her juices flowed onto my face. I plunged my tongue into her center, tasting her.

    “Oh, my fucking God! More! Please! More,” Bette cried out.

    Feeling she was almost ready to come, I lapped against her clit firmly and quickly. I entered her again with two, then three fingers, moving in and out.

    “Come up here, Helena. And kiss me,” Bette begged.

    My fingers still moving inside her, I slid my way back up to kiss her.

    She was trembling. I felt her tremors flow through her when I curled my fingers inside her.

    Soon she was at rest beside me. Her breathing slowing. I propped myself up on one elbow to watch her. I caressed her breasts tenderly with my fingertips.

    She turned and looked at me and smiled. Then she smoothed my cheek with her hand as I closed my eyes to savor her gentleness. I clasped my hand around hers and moved her fingers to my lips, kissing their tips.

    “You were the one who asked me to make you come,” she said softly.

    I smiled back at her. “This was just as good,” I assured her.

    She rubbed the side of my face. I watched her eyes shine in the dancing candlelight.

    “You were so wonderful to me,” Bette whispered.

    I kissed her. “It was my pleasure.”

    Bette rolled over on top of me. She held my hands outstretched above my head. Her breasts pressed into mine, as she kissed me gently.

    “Mmm. And my pleasure too,” she said as she drew her head back and smiled at me. I wanted to melt. “And the night’s just beginning. You did ask me to stay, didn’t you?” she asked, kissing me again.

    “Mm-hmm. All night,” I said, my mouth smiling into hers.

    “Good. Because you were going to have a hard time getting rid of me, if not,” Bette affirmed, licking my lips and continuing to kiss me.

    I didn’t say it out loud, but I thought to myself, ‘Now that I’ve finally got you where I want you, I have no intention of letting you get away.’







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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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