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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    Bette reached to grab my arm to regain her balance.

    Steadying herself, she said, shocked at my antics, but still smiling, “And again, I ask, why would you want to do that?” Bette skillfully grabbed my shoulders and turned me around. Now, my back was to the pool. She smiled cunningly. “Besides, I think you’re the one who needs to be cooled off.”

    “Bette, don’t! Please!” I begged.

    “Why? You don’t want me to strip you out of your wet clothes and wrap you in a bathrobe?” she asked with a grin. Bette pushed her hands against my shoulders, but gently, mocking my earlier gesture. “I think you’d look exceptionally sexy, naked under a bathrobe,” she said inching deviously close to me. “But it wouldn’t be quite as titillating as the actual process of disrobing you.”

    “Which was my point,” I admitted, before adding, “And a robe makes access so much easier.”

    “I thought those were your considerations,” Bette said confidently.

    With rapidity, I glanced over my shoulder to see how close I was to the edge of the pool. Just a few inches, I judged. I turned back around, and quickly and tightly clasped both of Bette’s arms just below her elbows.

    “You never answered my question, Bette,” I said, trying to catch her off guard.

    “What question was that?” she asked, trying to remember.

    I still had my hands wrapped tightly around her forearms. The few moments she pondered gave me just enough time to achieve the leverage to propel her with me. I took one step back and purposely fell into the deep end of the pool. The water swallowed us as it drowned Bette’s shriek.

    I surfaced first and waited for Bette to come up for air. When she did, I swam up to her and pinned her against the wall. The waves lapped around us.

    “Damn it, Helena!“ she laughed, wrapping her arms around my neck. God, she looked beautiful, so wet and surprised. I embraced her lips with mine, and pulled her closer with one hand on her face and the other clasped behind her head. When I tried to pull away to speak, she enticed me back with the point of her tongue dancing, rolling, and flicking against mine.

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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