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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    I managed to pull my lips from hers. But Bette nuzzled her face into my neck and licked wildly.


    “So are you going to answer my question?” I asked, squirming with pleasure.

    Pulling me back to lick my ear, she inquired back, “Mmm. Which was?”

    “The one I asked you on the beach, before all this got started. Are you hungry?” I reminded, still holding her closely.

    “Oh, that one,” Bette replied. She moved her head back and rolled her eyes upwards, feigning deliberation, and sliding her hands beneath my shoulders. Finally, she announced, “I do believe I’m famished. And in need of a bathrobe. As are you.” She smiled and, under the water, stroked her thumbs, over sheer wet fabric, against my nipples.

    “Our little plunge didn’t do a thing to cool us off, did it?” I observed, before kissing her again.

    “Mmm,” Bette moaned, licking and sucking my mouth and tongue breathlessly. “Nothing. Nothing at all.”

    When we eventually climbed out of the pool, soaked in our waterlogged clothes, I led Bette to the changing room, just inside the house, off the deck.

    We stood dripping all over the tile flooring. “Bette, there are towels on the shelf and a clean bathrobe hanging behind this door,” I said, opening it. “I’ll take care of your wet clothes when I get back.”

    I gave Bette a quick kiss on her lips.

    “Where are you going?” Bette asked, grinning.

    “Why, to change into my robe, of course,” I smiled slyly, as I turned to make my way to my room.

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    I’d had a head start on Helena to peel off my wet clothes. But I’d also sat on the shut toilet seat for a long time, with my head in my hands, pondering everything that was happening. It shouldn’t have surprised me when, just as I finished tying the belt on my bathrobe, I heard a faint knocking on the changing room door that announced Helena’s return.

    Emerging from behind the door, I found Helena wrapped in a fuchsia colored, silk robe holding her wet clothes in her arms.

    “Hi,” I smiled.

    “Hi,” Helena said, smiling back. “Get your wet clothing and I’ll wash and dry it for us,” she instructed.

    “You know how to wash and dry clothes?” I teased.

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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