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Stained – Chapter 9 part 1
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Chapter 9
It had been two weeks since that fateful day when Bette and David’s ice cream had met. Eric and Tina had had their relationship talk and things seemed to be going a little better for them. Eric was no longer acting like they were joined at the hip and Tina was giving Eric more attention. Still, even though the gnawing feeling had decreased, it was there, like a little spark slowly burning inside of Tina telling her that she was missing out on something. Certain things seemed to momentarily make the little spark light up to a roaring flame. Things like the giant bill board, which Tina passed each day on her way to work, promoting a new movie starring a certain brunette. But Tina made sure not to get burned by the fire and each time skillfully put it out again.
She had spent the night at Eric’s, which is why he was driving her to The Centre this lovely Saturday morning.
"Thanks, sweetie!" Tina said. She gave Eric a kiss and got out of the car.
"Do you want me to pick you up when you’re done?" Eric thoughtfully asked through the open car window.
"No, I’m fine. I’ll just take a cab."
Eric knew not to violate their agreement by pushing Tina. Her refusing his offer was her way of telling him they wouldn’t be spending more time together this Saturday.
When Tina stepped inside she saw that most of the kids were already there. They were going to be playing golf today. Frankly, Tina couldn’t think of any sport she was less interested in playing than golf. ‘I suppose anything is fun with these kids, though.’ Few things made her happier than seeing a smile on their faces.
The Centre had gotten a very generous offer from some big fancy country club. Not only were the kids allowed to play golf, they had also provided transport and lessons from one of the finest golf instructors in the country.
While she was greeting the other volunteers, Tina saw David walking over to the window and closely scanning the street.
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This is such a great story. I look for it everyday. I can see why Tina is totally intimidated. Who wouldn’t be. And I love that Bette feels the same. Looking forward to more.
Please please continue, i love the way this story is going, i’m addicted. :D Keep it coming, good luck studying
Where is the line for the Bette and Tina show? I would have to line up behing Tina but I would definately like to be in the same line. Go Bette and Tina.
Good chapter and now let see Bette and Tina time together!
de nial i like it!!
Love it, LMAO, can’t wait for the next post. Just read all prev chapters and your ‘Alice/Bette’ banter is spot on. Thanks.
Kids really do say the darndest things. LOL Man I’m still half-asleep (only been awake for 20 minutes) and I managed to understand the Matrix bit, which I haven’t seen all the way through, by the way. And I do agree about kids’ shows looking like a bad trip. Sid and Marty Kroft did a fine job of that. I don’t know what the coconut thing is thought, but I had to fight not to loudly sing, “I’ve got a lovely bunch of coconuts!” Please post whenever you can, and good luck with studying!
‘Bette looked up at the evil puppet master Ilene Chaiken who was making her do all these out-of-character things like cheating and going to a freaking silent retreat where people shaved their heads but not their armpits.’ huh… *looks astonished* LMFAO!!!!!!!! You’re really something! Thanks so much for the updat! Love it! Succes met je examens!
you crack me up, i luv your writing, can’t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That little paragraph with the bald man and red pill…ok, it totally made my morning and fortified me for the really boring lecture I have to go sit through. As always, I’m loving your take on a B&T beginning and can’t wait to read more! Yay for finals, huh? Yeah, that’ll be me in like…a week. Anyway! Thanks! Great story! Can’t wait for more!
Great to see a post from you so soon – thank you. Now on with the studying girl!!!!
Wow! Glad to see another post! I am anxious for this to continue. I’m loving it! Although, I am greedy to be fed more B&T beginning stories, studying comes first!!! (Did I really just say that? LOL)
this is really good and funny, can’t wait for more
Ovide en zijn vrienden… lol! Tijdje geleden maar ik zie ze nog zo voor me! Great story, please post soon.
Beo. . .AHAHAHAHAHA! This story’s cracking me up! We seem to share the same sense of humor, I wonder if it’s because we’re both sleep deprived because of school and work. Hmmm. . . good luck in chemistry, I’m off to Sign Language. Please post again soon!
You had me laughing my ass off. Love that matrix bit. But what I loved the most was Tina’s Grandmother chirping in on Tina’s thoughts. I hope you get an “A” in chemistry.
I wish reading fanfic could count towards my exams – oh well good luck with yours. I am so addicted to Bette and Tina that I think I am going to fail my degree if someone doesn’t stop me from accessing the internet or watching the DVDs really soon! Oh well it’s a small sacrifice! Fantastic chapter as always – love the mix of cuteness, digs at golfers and hilarious Latrix stuff. You are a genius! Hope you can find time to write as well as work but I will try to be patient despite my need for another fix. Thanks again for posting.
lol