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Stained – Chapter 9 part 1
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"Morning, David. What are you looking for?" Tina asked him, already knowing what his answer would be.
"I was just looking for Bette." The boy replied.
"Oh David, I don’t think she’ll be joining us today." Tina’s heart was breaking when she saw how disappointed David looked.
"I’m so sorry, sweetie. She’s just really busy. I’m sure she tried to get away." Tina tried to comfort him.
"She sure did." Tina heard a voice behind her say. Both she and David quickly turned around.
"Not without my morning coffee, though, which is why I’m a little late."
"Bette!" David screamed excitedly and he ran over to give her a hug.
"Good to see you, too." Bette laughed.
"I thought you weren’t going to come?"
"I wouldn’t want to miss this for the world. So tell me, what are we doing today?"
"Someone’s going to teach us how to play golf! Isn’t it exiting?" David was jumping up and down by now.
"Sure is. Do you know where?"
"Tina said we’re going to some big butt – well, she didn’t say butt, but I’m not allowed to say the word she said – country club where all the …elitrist narcifists … are letting us play because charity is very fashionable." David happily announced.
Tina felt all the blood rushing to her head. ‘Shit, I guess little pitchers really do have long ears.’ She was, however, still too stunned that Bette was actually standing here at 9 a.m. in the morning to say anything. Tina hadn’t thought it possible, but Bette looked even more amazing in casual clothing. She was wearing low-rise boot cut jeans and a tank top. Her hair was casually pulled back and – naturally – she had brought her beloved sunglasses. Tina’s body temperature had instantly risen and already she was wondering how the hell she had gotten by these last two weeks with just that movie and her bill board. The little spark had gone right past big flame to roaring fire again and with Bette so close there was no way Tina could extinguish it. ‘The roaring fires of hell, ya big dyke!’ Tina could already hear her grandmother say. ‘Dammit, it’s happening again! Like I don’t have enough to deal with without having to hear imaginary comments from a woman with such tunnel vision that I’m surprised she can still see me.’ Luckily, Tina’s train of thought was interrupted when she heard Bette laugh.
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This is such a great story. I look for it everyday. I can see why Tina is totally intimidated. Who wouldn’t be. And I love that Bette feels the same. Looking forward to more.
Please please continue, i love the way this story is going, i’m addicted. :D Keep it coming, good luck studying
Where is the line for the Bette and Tina show? I would have to line up behing Tina but I would definately like to be in the same line. Go Bette and Tina.
Good chapter and now let see Bette and Tina time together!
de nial i like it!!
Love it, LMAO, can’t wait for the next post. Just read all prev chapters and your ‘Alice/Bette’ banter is spot on. Thanks.
Kids really do say the darndest things. LOL Man I’m still half-asleep (only been awake for 20 minutes) and I managed to understand the Matrix bit, which I haven’t seen all the way through, by the way. And I do agree about kids’ shows looking like a bad trip. Sid and Marty Kroft did a fine job of that. I don’t know what the coconut thing is thought, but I had to fight not to loudly sing, “I’ve got a lovely bunch of coconuts!” Please post whenever you can, and good luck with studying!
‘Bette looked up at the evil puppet master Ilene Chaiken who was making her do all these out-of-character things like cheating and going to a freaking silent retreat where people shaved their heads but not their armpits.’ huh… *looks astonished* LMFAO!!!!!!!! You’re really something! Thanks so much for the updat! Love it! Succes met je examens!
you crack me up, i luv your writing, can’t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That little paragraph with the bald man and red pill…ok, it totally made my morning and fortified me for the really boring lecture I have to go sit through. As always, I’m loving your take on a B&T beginning and can’t wait to read more! Yay for finals, huh? Yeah, that’ll be me in like…a week. Anyway! Thanks! Great story! Can’t wait for more!
Great to see a post from you so soon – thank you. Now on with the studying girl!!!!
Wow! Glad to see another post! I am anxious for this to continue. I’m loving it! Although, I am greedy to be fed more B&T beginning stories, studying comes first!!! (Did I really just say that? LOL)
this is really good and funny, can’t wait for more
Ovide en zijn vrienden… lol! Tijdje geleden maar ik zie ze nog zo voor me! Great story, please post soon.
Beo. . .AHAHAHAHAHA! This story’s cracking me up! We seem to share the same sense of humor, I wonder if it’s because we’re both sleep deprived because of school and work. Hmmm. . . good luck in chemistry, I’m off to Sign Language. Please post again soon!
You had me laughing my ass off. Love that matrix bit. But what I loved the most was Tina’s Grandmother chirping in on Tina’s thoughts. I hope you get an “A” in chemistry.
I wish reading fanfic could count towards my exams – oh well good luck with yours. I am so addicted to Bette and Tina that I think I am going to fail my degree if someone doesn’t stop me from accessing the internet or watching the DVDs really soon! Oh well it’s a small sacrifice! Fantastic chapter as always – love the mix of cuteness, digs at golfers and hilarious Latrix stuff. You are a genius! Hope you can find time to write as well as work but I will try to be patient despite my need for another fix. Thanks again for posting.
lol