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Stained – Chapter 9 part 1
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"Did she now? I take it you’re not a golf fan then?" The last question was directed at Tina.
"I can think of more fun things to do." Tina admitted, while thinking of one particularly fun activity she wanted to engage in with Bette right now.
"Yes, I feel your pain." Bette grinned, her mind drifting off to other part of Tina she wouldn’t mind feeling.
Just then the bus that was going to take them to the golf course arrived.
"Well, I guess we better get going." Bette said, suddenly aware that she had been staring at Tina. "Wouldn’t want to keep the – what was that again, David? Elitrist narcifsts waiting…" Bette teased Tina as looked into those delightful eyes.
David nodded at Bette, convinced he had gotten all the big words right.
When the kids were getting into the bus, Tina introduced Bette to the other volunteers, who barely managed to keep their jaws form hitting the floor. Bette pretended not to notice.
Tina was a little disappointed when David claimed the seat next to Bette on the bus, – ‘Christ, how old am I? It’s like not getting to sit next to the popular kid on the school bus.’ – but she was also somewhat relieved. Now she had time to think about all these weird feelings that apparently hadn’t just been a one time thing.
‘Does this mean I’m gay?’ Tina contemplated. She had never really been attracted to a woman before. ‘That could just be because I never thought it to be a possibility. No, that’s not it. There’s just something about Bette… No shit, Tina! Of course there’s something about Bette; the whole country… scratch that… the whole world loves her! You don’t even now anything about her for crying out loud! No use in obsessing over some famous woman, she’s got thousands of people doing that already.’
As Tina’s heart and mind were having their two-way monologues, Bette was doing something similar. At first she had been talking to David, but he had gotten into a discussion with one of the other kids about some obscure TV show were TV’s apparently popped out of nowhere on some strange island. David and the other kid were now frantically singing a song about coconuts which the platypus and his island friends sung. *Ovide and the gang!!! Sorry, childhood memory* The other kid seemed to prefer Barbapapa and Sponge Bob. At least Bette knew what Sponge Bob was, she didn’t even want to know what a Barbapapa was supposed to be…
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This is such a great story. I look for it everyday. I can see why Tina is totally intimidated. Who wouldn’t be. And I love that Bette feels the same. Looking forward to more.
Please please continue, i love the way this story is going, i’m addicted. :D Keep it coming, good luck studying
Where is the line for the Bette and Tina show? I would have to line up behing Tina but I would definately like to be in the same line. Go Bette and Tina.
Good chapter and now let see Bette and Tina time together!
de nial i like it!!
Love it, LMAO, can’t wait for the next post. Just read all prev chapters and your ‘Alice/Bette’ banter is spot on. Thanks.
Kids really do say the darndest things. LOL Man I’m still half-asleep (only been awake for 20 minutes) and I managed to understand the Matrix bit, which I haven’t seen all the way through, by the way. And I do agree about kids’ shows looking like a bad trip. Sid and Marty Kroft did a fine job of that. I don’t know what the coconut thing is thought, but I had to fight not to loudly sing, “I’ve got a lovely bunch of coconuts!” Please post whenever you can, and good luck with studying!
‘Bette looked up at the evil puppet master Ilene Chaiken who was making her do all these out-of-character things like cheating and going to a freaking silent retreat where people shaved their heads but not their armpits.’ huh… *looks astonished* LMFAO!!!!!!!! You’re really something! Thanks so much for the updat! Love it! Succes met je examens!
you crack me up, i luv your writing, can’t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That little paragraph with the bald man and red pill…ok, it totally made my morning and fortified me for the really boring lecture I have to go sit through. As always, I’m loving your take on a B&T beginning and can’t wait to read more! Yay for finals, huh? Yeah, that’ll be me in like…a week. Anyway! Thanks! Great story! Can’t wait for more!
Great to see a post from you so soon – thank you. Now on with the studying girl!!!!
Wow! Glad to see another post! I am anxious for this to continue. I’m loving it! Although, I am greedy to be fed more B&T beginning stories, studying comes first!!! (Did I really just say that? LOL)
this is really good and funny, can’t wait for more
Ovide en zijn vrienden… lol! Tijdje geleden maar ik zie ze nog zo voor me! Great story, please post soon.
Beo. . .AHAHAHAHAHA! This story’s cracking me up! We seem to share the same sense of humor, I wonder if it’s because we’re both sleep deprived because of school and work. Hmmm. . . good luck in chemistry, I’m off to Sign Language. Please post again soon!
You had me laughing my ass off. Love that matrix bit. But what I loved the most was Tina’s Grandmother chirping in on Tina’s thoughts. I hope you get an “A” in chemistry.
I wish reading fanfic could count towards my exams – oh well good luck with yours. I am so addicted to Bette and Tina that I think I am going to fail my degree if someone doesn’t stop me from accessing the internet or watching the DVDs really soon! Oh well it’s a small sacrifice! Fantastic chapter as always – love the mix of cuteness, digs at golfers and hilarious Latrix stuff. You are a genius! Hope you can find time to write as well as work but I will try to be patient despite my need for another fix. Thanks again for posting.
lol