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    A Thin Line – Chpt 31

    Story written on August 8, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Saturday afternoon

    “I know better than to ask you that. Your appetite is insatiable,” I grinned, caressing her cheek with my hand and tapping her nose with my index finger.

    Bette caught my hand with hers and kissed it.

    “Hurry back,” she smiled.

    When I returned fifteen or twenty minutes later, with the bottled water and salads on a tray, Bette’s gaze was transfixed on the ocean view. She looked completely at peace.

    As I set the tray on the table, I wondered if I should ask her the question that was on my mind, the one that I had been considering, the one that had occupied my thoughts increasingly for the past couple of days. But I decided to hold my tongue.

    “Ready for lunch?” I asked cheerfully, interrupting Bette’s reverie.

    Bette jumped. I’d startled her.

    “Did I scare you?” I laughed.

    “I guess I was just totally relaxed and absorbed in my thoughts. In another world. It’s so tranquil here,” Bette mused, rising from her seat and making her way to the table. She picked up a bottle and twisted off the cap before pulling out a chair. “I was listening to the surf crash. And wash in and out. It’s so mesmerizing. And so beautiful here. Thank you for sharing it with me.”

    My heart leapt. Had Bette been reading my mind?

    We each took a seat.

    “Well, I hope we’ll be sharing many more days here together,” I said, placing my napkin in my lap. I almost had to bite my lip to keep from asking her my question. Instead, I queried, “And where, pray tell, have your thoughts been taking you in my absence, as you’ve gazed out over this captivating, vast expanse, my Darling?”

    Bette’s expression broke into a grin that betrayed a mischief contemplation.

    “I’m not sure that it’s appropriate lunch conversation,” Bette teased.

    “Bette? What is it? Tell me,” I pled.

    “Well, part of the time I was thinking about the dream I had about you last night,” she confessed.

    “Oh? That would be the erotic one you mentioned to me this morning, when I offered you my fingers to lick?” I recalled, smiling.

    “Mmm-hmm. That’s the one,” Bette acknowledged, biting into a slice of tomato and drizzling dressing over her salad.

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    1. Congrats on the award, I began reading this story from the link on that page and the award is well deserved. You write with a playful and classy flair that is a rare find. I’ll be reading from here on out.

    2. oh wow Zheese an award, great stuff girl congrats. Now about your chapter I loved it I mean I really really loved it but what’s the matter with you leaving us hanging there????? Post soon okay thanks

    3. It occured to me while reading this that never in my life have I ever gotten into a sarong. So they’re going domestic already? That’s some mojo they’re working.

    4. Congrats on the award. I like that your R and NC-17 chapters are different. Very hot, playful and teasing but not sleazy or common. “A Thinking Woman’s NC-17” if you will.

    5. Congrats on the award. Love this story, and the pace you’ve set for it. What’s the errand, is it a surprise for Helena. You know the more Bette/Helena stories I read the more, I think they would be a very interesting couple if we can’t have B&T. I mean come on, they’re bringing all these other characters into the show this season, why are they not working with what we’ve got. Cos other than Tina, Helena is the only other person that seems like it would work. Cybil Shepard and Marilee Matlin, nothing personal but NOT>

    7. Your award is soooooooo well deserved. I went back today just to reread your story cause it’s the best!!!! This love is so rare they have, you keep it so exciting. So what is our little Bette up to?? Can’t wait to see. Lucky Helena!

    8. really liked the chapter…but don’t keep us waiting too long…the suspense – it’s great, but…well, your writing is fantastic, so it’ll be worth the wait…i’ll stop whining..post soon!!!

    9. Congrats Zheese, I finally know what award you’ve won! :) thanks for the pM, I just got it today. Had been busy, so I hardly come up for air! Actually, the honest truth is, I liked your story more than the sex parts, the more dimensional romantic, warm and fuzzy stuff, and definitely the unexpected surprises that come – like phone calls etc. :D You’re a good writer! Please continue to write whatever comes to your head! :) Great stuff!

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